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Hi..! First,I must thank u a lot 4 writing this fic..I have just started reading this..And I think,it's a great fic,really..Keep up your good work!And,please don't drop this fic..I'll be waiting 4 the next fic.Jya mata ashita!

Starry can't see why you have so few reviews. I enjoyed this fic very much and look forward to the later chapters.

Hello! Love your story and I'm looking forward to updates! Me

Its a great story man i cant wait for the next chapter
plz hurry

Hm....I wonder what Sasuke will say- yes or no.... probably yes xD;; Now that yer showing us all how Sasuke was when he came back from Orochimaru, it kind of makes Sasuke seem pathetic [man, I feel horrible saying that o o;;] But yeah, I want to see more on it, see how he went back to being Naruto's friend and becoming accepted again....

I await anxiously for the next chapter!! good luck!!

...I think I've read this some were before and what happend to Naruto being pregent? I'm so lost! T-T

This was surprisingly good. i don't normally read over on adult fan fiction, instead reading on fanfiction.com, but this had something that made me want to read it. I think how you used the fox's own motivation in to explain the improbablity of a sexy no jutsu having this outcome and that it didn't just magically turn everythig happy happy.

This story deffinitely deserves reviews! I started reading this last night, and I just finished it last night- I have to say, this is the only time that I've read an mpreg and didn't hate it immediately. It was done in a very tasteful fashion, and I have to say, I pretty much love this story! So write more, ne?

I just found this story and read it from start to latest chapter in one go. You had me hooked. I really like that its not a simple Naruto and Sasuke fall for one another and one is always dominate to the other. It seems more like a real give-take relationship. I can't wait to see what the child is like and what happens with everyone else finds out.

As a small criticism, I noticed that certain words were misspelled consistently, like "defiantly" instead of "definantly". If it was supposed to be "defiantly," I apologize, but I would still have to say that would be an odd word choice in certain areas.

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter,
A new fan (<--and no, this was not supposed to be a pun :)

i like it, update or die!