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for As Long as it Feels OK

by hawkmun

person ash
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really am liking this story and I would deeply appreciate it if you kept writing. It would be horrible if you stopped. I gotta know what happens to Naruto!...So keep writing and I'll keep reading.
person Leasan
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... You say there are less reviews now than earlier. Hmm, it made me think.
I follow your fic for some time now and I must say that latest chapters are somehow less gripping.
It's like the details or conversations, everything lost a bit of its intriguing character, novelty maybe? Quick pace too.
I don't know really, but if you compare the first chapters to the latest you can see a difference.
But I like the fic nevertheless so keep writing, especially now, when the plot seems to have a chance to speed up with akatsuki, Itachi and Sasuke fighting for love and not hate. Now that would be something nice, wouldn't it :)
person MultifacetedTune
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm ever so glad that you updated -- I can't wait to find out what happens to Naru-kun!!! ^^ Keep up the good work!!!
person chem chick
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this story is still awesome! Can't wait for more! Keep up the excellent work!
person Arryelle(Aka. SexGoddess)
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWW so angsty already thats so sad taken by that TEME itachi kill him please
well update soon

Arry
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It seems things are starting to pick up! I have to say that I am completly in suspense. I hope you find the time to update as soon as possible.

Whishing you the best of luck,

rAiNwAtEr
person vampchic
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!! He cant be taken away!! Sasuke needs to get him back! Why didn't the kyuubi sense Itachi? Is the preganancy messing up with his senses that much? And dont worry, I still love ya!! Well, more like I love the fic, but since you write the fic, therefore I love ya too.^^
Anyway, update soon. Cant wait to find out what happens next!
person allyluv17
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great update!!! please don't let the atasuki extract kyubi from naruto and kill him and the baby. that would be too sad. please update again!!! this story is highly entertaining.
person Noelle
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mgnificent pleas keep writing I cant wait for your next pice of work/art
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your story is really amazing. I have to say I am drawn to the way you depict the charactors in this story. I hope you find the time to update and I wish you the best of luck. If it is not to much trouble, could you send me an e-mail when you update this story? Please and thankyou.

Your fan,

rAiNwAtEr

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