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for As Long as it Feels OK

by hawkmun

person WynterMajik
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the chapter, though, I don't like what they're doing to poor Naruto. :( I understand that you need your rest, and I think that you should get as much as possiable, but when you get some free time, please update. I'm so happy to see that you're not going to let the story die. :)
person Sakura
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that... was... the... greatest thing on earth you must continue and i mean right now
person Setsu
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo is Naruto's and the Kyuubi's maternal insticts going to kick in to try and protect the baby from Itachi? Will Itachi find out about Sasuke and Naruto's baby? Most likely. ^.^ Your write very well I love the story so far. You have a great imagination I can't wait to see what you have instore for the upcoming chapters. Will Gaara and Neji and everyone find out about Naruto's condition and go to save Naruto? I hope everything is going ok out theire for you ^.^ and that all your troubles will soon be over good luck. Ja ne till next chap! And thanks for the awesome story so far!
person Ash
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hope everything gets better! Luck!
person Sheli
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RE: Chapter 13
Thanks for the update. Sort yourself out then come back to us, but this isn't life or death. We'll be waiting when you come back.
person aoshi4misao
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gomen on your personal problems, I hope that you get them all cleared up soon. Good luck on the writing too. You are doing a great job so far. I will wait patiently for you to update.
person tina
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please oh please oh please update soon!!! this story is way awsome!!! i definatley cant wait for the next chapter =D
person Raphael Argai Thanatos
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, dun worry ^^ I'm sure whatever it is, everything will work out fine in the end - you have time, don't worry, those who truly love your story will patiently wait ;)
person Wynter
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is absoutly amazing. I love your writting style, and the plot is absolutly wonderful! This is the first Naruto fic i've read and I must say that it's definatly in my top ten favorite fics. :) Great job, and please update soon, but don't rush. I am willing to wait as long as I need to, and i'll come back everyday and see if you've updated. :)
person vampchic
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Take your time. Its better that the chapter comes out late and well writen. Dont want ya rushing it and having it not as good. I'll be waiting patiently though and I hope that things are okay with you. Until next time, ja ne!

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