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for As Long as it Feels OK

by hawkmun

person Ash
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took me so long to reply! I fianlly did tho and it was worth the wait.Poor Naruto....You better not kill him! I read a fic already that did that it it broke my heart.So I just have my fingers crossed.Oh and do write another chapter soon! I dispise cliffies with every fiber of my being.
person ChaoticSpecter
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good fic. i love what you have written so far and am eagerly awaiting more. looking forward to future updates.
person shadow_illusion
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Naruto-kun!!!! You said you weren't sure if you were going to continue the story because of a possible lack of interest. Well, I have interest in your story. I want to know what happens! If you don't continue the story then I, and I'm sure many others, will cry. It's a good story! I want to know if Sasuke accepts Naruto's love! What happens in the dungeon! What akatsuki are going to do! What Sasuke's going to do to save Naruto! ARGH! SO MUCH TO FIND OUT!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! Like tomorrow?
person Setsu
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! So happy to hear your continuing the story. Will Itachi find out about the baby? Whats he going to do when he does? WIll he possibly be nicer? Whats happening with the others? What are you going to poor defencles Naruto? Good luck with your job. Is Gaara going to show up to help Naruto? Is Orochimaru dead or will he be making an appearance? Poor Sasuke will he come to realize he has true feelings of love for Naruto now that he's gone? Why did Itachi take Naruto is it only because of the Fox demon like it thinks. Or does Itachi know about the baby and have different planes for Naruto?
person Shingo the Pest
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Worse? There's going to be worse coming? I'm interested. I wonder, do his captors know about the baby.

And by the way, congragulations on be a competant writer willing to tackle mpreg. You're a rare breed, and need to be appreciated.
person Reina
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow . . . . ..
nee nee what will happen to naruto next ....I want to know so keep writing because I will always rooting for you
*put up a banner* I want more .... I want more !!!!!
Nyepp~~~~~
he he (^o^) V
person MultifacetedTune
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is exstatic that you updated* Yippeeeeeeee!!! XDDDD
person AndzMinx
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really like it! On the torture idea um... I think physical torture would be fine, but could you please keep the mental to a minimum or at least not to the point that he is in anyway broken (make him stronger than that).
I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to Naruto's pregnancy, it's going to be so fun!!!!

Luv it, luv it, luv it!!
person Cim
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please dont give up on writing this. I'm a little suspicious about Kakashi and Sakura though..*shifty eyes*..same tent...kakashi changing it so he and she were on the same team...her eyes kept wandering to him...dun dun dunnnn
person bookworm51485
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what happened, it seems like the story was updated 7/12 and I checked everyday even after this date and didn't see the update til today, the old author's note was still there. I very happy to read this update, wish it was a bit longer but with your job and such it's understandable. I can't wait for the next update, it's been almost a month since ch 13 was updated so I'm hoping I won't have that long of a wait but I agree with you. It's better to take longer to write a chapter than to release crap. Anyways good job and I can't wait for your newest update.

Actually I wanted to ask one more thing, if it's not too much trouble I was wondering if you could email me when you update. I'm asking because of what happened this last update, but if it's too much trouble then don't bother. I can just keep checking til I find it. That's all:)

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