rate_review Reviews

Its a very interesting story and contains all three of my some of my favorite couples. The insight into the minds of all three boys was original and creative. However, I would suggest you get a beta to catch your mistakes such as "want" instead of "wont" and to keep youin proper tense. Its a very good story and I hope to read more soon.

that was a good chapter, though you need some more editing. I wouldn't mind being a beta reader and editing your work. can't wait for the other chapters to read.

I would love to b your BETa but I can't, sorry6, I don't have the proper microsoft word ^_^;; But good story, keep up the good work, ne? ^_^

I'll be your beta if you'd like.