rate_review Reviews

hey it looks like you got there and settled in
do you still want me to beta for you? just asking
anyway so glad you're writing again - I've needed some quality smut

yay!!! i love the story

wow... it was strange. i was wondering if you were ever going to update this story, since it had been months, and lo and behold, the long awaited chapter 6 is here! it's still very intriguing, especially with the addition of the twins, mainly the psychotic one. are you planning on setting naruto up with an oc?

Yay! This made my day. I've been waiting for an update for a long while and so freaking happy to see this chapter. Now I just can't wait for the next one. XD

That is awesome! I really love your writings, keep it up I was so pleased for an update.

About time you update. Love this story. Have it in my favorite folder.

Talk about complete turn to the story. I like it.

Big fan of Hinata/Sasuke pairing.

Update soon (please do not take longer than the last time!)

HUrry and Update!!!!

This story is awesome! I can't wait for chapter 6!!! I don't think I've ever been so captivated by a fan fiction, let alone an NC-17 one. Usually I just skip to the first sex scene I find and I always stop reading after I climax to it, but this story held my attention for the entire....I don't know, hour and a half that it took me to read it (give or take a few minutes). You have to understand that I have ADD, mild ADD, but ADD none the less. I really want to stress that I look forward to the next update with almost as much anticipation that I anticipate my scanlated Naruto update (which is late, I might add, as of today, narutofan.com, I don't care if you've kept up with scanning your RAW versions, I can't read Japanese damnit!) which is, very, very much and with much vehemence. I reccomend cutting out the (oh so hot and delicious) sex scenes so some more sites can host it. Especially if fanfiction.net will display R rated stories and such, I think it would be so so lovely to spread the awesomeness of this story!!! Keep up with the updating, Monkey Lady, I want more!

~~~ Love from the Ruler of the Holy Empire of the Spiritual Fishie, and everybody's favorite magical monkey, Alice.

please finsih this! I love the story...not really sure yet if I'm a SasukexHinata fan though...Still a thought...

i want the CONTINUATIN plz.....i'm dying to know what happens next and i have checking the story out for months now.....huhu...