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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one hell of a chapter, sad that there's only one more to look forward to. Either way, looking forward to the next one. =D
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! It has good detail and it has a great and weird couple and I can't wait to see what the other Shinobi's think of their relationship. Update soon!
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah this chap. was great truthfully i kept checking back so see when you would update plz hurry with the next :)
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry the fuck up and update
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
muwahahahaha!!!! good story but alot of grammar problems.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im looking forward to the next chapter cause ankoxnaruto pairs is extremely rare and im a fan of different coupling and this site is mostly yaoi and im not really in favor of yaoi so plzzzzzz continue.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awright! AnkoNaru, one of my favourite pairings. I am writing a fic with that pairing myself, so I see why you chose it. Because it's so freaking funny seeing and writing their interaction! Two violently hyperactive ninjas together, it just can't go wrong! Although it's true that you have a few spelling errors here and there, I think it looks alright, as someone else said that Anko is a but OOC, but that's okay as well as long as the fiction will keep up this level of entertainment. Just add a bit more descriptions and details behind reactions of the characters. Like why Kakashi scratched his head. I guessed it was because he's wondering why she would chose Naruto of all people but it wasn't really detailed in, so if you did add the thoughts behind it, the fiction will have more fill to it.
I like it, I like it, I like it a lot. Keep up the good work Ninja boy!
I like it, I like it, I like it a lot. Keep up the good work Ninja boy!
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning, just please continue with it
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it, I did't find any wrong whit it!!!
So please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!