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(Ch. 2)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! You bitch!! No! Why such a mean cliffhanger?!?!
Please, update!! This story is wonderful!

[Enough with the mean cliffhangers. We're already all hooked to your fiction. ^.~]

Until the next [speedy] update,
Ja ne~
<3

Interesting.

Everything is pretty good in general. The only thing that irks me about this piece is that the facts feel a little ...wrong to me. For example, Itachi is definitely not the leader of Akatsuki and I don't think the Sound village even has a kage. I thought that the title kage is only given to the villages that are powerful and well established. I guess you could say that a few years is enough for Sasuke to develop the village into something more powerful, but would he really? I just imagine him forcing the people in his land into training for his army instead of being a good ruler. So I really don't see how he could make the village prosper.

Thank you.

Cool. your story line is good.

another good chapter. Keep up the great writing. Till next time, Ja!

more.. more >< please update! please! wanna get to de "action" part

It's awesome! One of the few actually good stories on this website. That's really cool you're putting chapters up so quickly.

UPDATE!!! THIS IS SO GOOD TO READ!!!

OoOoOoohhhhhhh.........interesting!!! ^___~ Absolutely wonderful idea -- can't wait to find out what happens next!!! (...though I have an idea.......) ^___~ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP, k? Ja ne!!!

::nods:: good beginning. Looking forward to more. Ja!

(Ch. 1)
*with tears in her eyes* Please continue this story.
Please.