rate_review Reviews

There is a story on fanfiction.net called "Heaven's A Lie" that is so close to this one that it has to be stollen. This story is great one of the best that I have ever read and I hate to see someone belittle it by stealing it so easily.

Undoubtedly one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Very enjoyable.

Another awesome story. I laughed, I cried (a lot) and stayed up late so I could finish reading this story. I love your writing and look forward to reading more.

I love this story I hope that you make a sequel to this story it could be about Naruto and Sasuke raising baby Kyuubi or something like that I hope to see a sequel soon.

ok one word describes this story- WOW!
i loved it, i was hooked from the first chapter!
i loved the way you got the empathy rolling with the characters, lol i think my heart was in my mouth the first time sasuke had heroin!
well, i loved the story, im kinda sad that it's over, but really glad you wrote it. i wont be forgetting this one very soon!!

woah!! i really love this story!! angst, gore, hurt-comfort, !strong naruto and sasuke and orochimaru!! my fav elements in fics ^__^

.....just wondering but between sasuke, naruto and kyuubi. will they have a serious case of oedipus complex going on? incest? >:3

wow i havn't reviewed the entire time but i just finished your story. it was really good REALLY GOOD. i luv'd this thing all the way through and couldn't stop wondering about the next time i could get to my lap top and finish reading it .
i was a little surprised about how subtle it ends though just him waking up as partially the old him and 3 months later he has a kid, his little sasuke lover, and so on and thats how it ends. preety subtle but n-e ways i luvd it ur really good!!!

o ya i just had to right some of this in. after reading your story 4 so long i don't know if i just got used to it or it got better but u had way too many mistakes but once i got past the first chapter i was so in-love wit ur story i barly noticed the misspeeling and stuff. i can't remeber all the stuff i had to say but all i can remember @ the moment is that it bothered the hell out of me it's not gui its gai-sensai (thuogh im not sure how to spell sensie(?) so 4get that part) but still that wuz annoying lol o and umm is there n-e chance u wrote "ruby red chakra" cuz i read this one fic and if u didn't u can find it but in the kyuubi/sasuke first rape seen @ orochimarus, i noticed half the chapters were word for word the same as the fic. so if u didn't write it u can go look 4 urself. n-e ways ur great at writing! ur creative!!

started out pretty good and i luved the whole kyuubi going on a rampage part but orochimaru taking naruto to the sound village just killed it-ruined it, i stopped reading after chapter 7...

-Cries- Oh my goodness! It's a happy ending. I thought you would make it some sort of half-sad half-happy ending type thing. I'm so glad to have been your beta, but I must ask, what happened to me being your beta?