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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeal! You write Sakura so good! And yeah, Naruto and Sasuke! Finally! I totally love this, keep it up!
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
luv ur fanfic soo far plz write more lol n make sakura kick more ass
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w00t i am in love please continue to update =) ur awesome
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hinata seems a lot more forward than I'd expect, but I guess if she's working in a place like that...
Yay! More updates! ^_^
Yay! More updates! ^_^
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoops... forgot to sign in. Above is mine.
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Usually I don't like AUs but this one looks really interesting. I'll be watching for updates!
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG This story has so much potential! I absolutely love gang stories. I hope everything turns out as great as the beginning. Perhaps some Gaara/Saku action? Haha I'm not pushy, they're just my favorite couple. Do as you like and it will be awesome. Wonderful start! <3333
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, this looks so cool. XD all the guys of Konoha are gang members, YAY! Make sure my lovely Kiba and Shino get some sportlight ::hugs shino and kiba posters:: nah, just kidding, that's why I write my own stories XD. Anyway, good job and keep it up.
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You reeled me in with NaruSakuSasu (on of my favorite pairings!) and you kept me interested. I rarely read fics with a Sakura focus, but I don't think you'll disappoint. ^_^ You write her with spunk, which is one of the reasons I like her, and you're good with details and keeping your audience in the know without overwhelming them with information. I question your characterization of Hinata (I can't imagine her ever being that forward!), but the other characters were very well done. Can't wait to meet the boys. ^_^
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job. keep going i dont want this story to die like so many others do on this site.