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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Jadej.j
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh poor Sasuke he needs his Naruto-kun to kiss him badly...
person turtledonkey27
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved the horse voice--i was laughing so hard i think i scared some people. stillllll standing here....
and damn it! they were so close!
person Esca
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO DAMN U NARUTOS STOMACH WELL ANY WHOO AWSOME CHAPTER ENJOYED IT ALOT KEEP ON GOING
person kai
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great update!! i love that sasuke is deathly afraid of his horse! XD And damn it, the kiss had to be spoiled by naruto's stomach!! WHY!?!? So close!!But sasuke must remember the bet!! XP UPDATE SOON! I really love this fic!!
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again, I hope I didn't miss anyone. The next chapter will clear a few things up for you guys, honest! ^_^
person KirikouChan
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So cute, you should do more 'horse talk'.
Loved the little 'battle' Sasuke was having with his horse ^^

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter,
Greetz K-chan
person Kireii
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TALK ABOUT CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!! T____T so close, they where SO CLOSE!!!! *goes into a hole to cry* No but really, the story line is great, i love the way you made the characters your own but not so much that it takes away from who they are. The way that Naruto has so many levels to him that you just dont know about until you're told is great. And the whole "secret". Its just something you want to know about immediately and the teasing hints just makes you want to keep reading until you find out. All together its a great story and i cant wait for the update. Id like to be put on the update list if you dont mind, i cant wait to read it.

oh and by the way.............i officially hate you for going to Japan > :| j/k ^-^


Kireii
person Yurikai Kurosaki
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God! This is annoying...!!!(Sigh) Poor Sasuke!!!When will he ever get HIS Naruto??!!!!héhé
JEEZ! Your story is SOOOOOOO incredible!!!! I just can't get enough of it ^______^

So you say there will be two more update and then, you're leaving for some time...Well, of course i won't hold any grudge, i'm sooo not trying to mentaly kill you either. But i'm a bit sad about this!!!(OOOUUUUIIIIIIIINNNNN=(crocodile tears)...

But then again, Japan huh? I wish i could go there someday too......Hope you'll have a great time there!!! Until then, two more chapters!!!YEAH!!!!GO GO SASUKE!!!!(I just so love this pairing)

See ya
person Hitomi
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 11)
"Thank god I didn’t wet myself. I’d NEVER live that down. He blinked. I didn’t, did I? He glanced down. Nope. Good." XDDD
Oh God! They got so close, dammit! GRRAAHH!! I was sooo hoping for some action before you left for Japan.
I'm sure gonna miss your updates for those two whole months. Try to spoile us as much as you can; maybe add one more extra update before you leave, try and update from Japan, whatever you can. 'Cause I know my skin will be crawling with out some sort of satisfaction. After all I need a good author to fullfil my Naruto fix! ^.~

Update soon!^^
Ja ne~
person La La
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha. Sasuke is so paranoid. I was too actually when I rode a horse, even though there was someone holding the reins and pulling the horse along. Eh, it was scary. >.< Does Shikamaru know how Sasuke or Naruto feels? He's too smart for his own good. ^^

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