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by megladon129

person Metranome
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mein fuhrer demands reviews, mein fuhrer gets reviews! Heil Naruto fics! Hm...was that a bad joke? Sorry. I'm really looking forward to more of this. And what exactly is that evil Hyuuga planning? I guess I'll have to wait and see. Oh well, I'll live. Maybe. *whimper*
person Baka_Tsu
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. That chapter was so great... ;____; BUT YOU LOVE TO TEASE SO MUCH T________T;;;;; You gotta hook those two up already damnit >< <3
person Elisha
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O Your stories are awesome!! =) plz continue!!!!
person Kai
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glomps to an inch from death* YESSSS!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! KEEP WRITING, GIRL!!!!!! YOU ROCK!!!!!!
LOVE YA!!!! XOXOXOXOXOXOX
KAI
person DeadUchiha
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, Now things are finally starting to heat back up!!! It got a little cool for a while...Damn you for being so...Teasy! Sheesh! You really are trying to kill people aren't you!?! Graet job though...can't wait to read more!!! I just kno you are going to back to thet bastard Neji in the next chapter...*sigh* I fucking HATE him!!! That's okay though...makes the good stuff better!! Oh yeah! I really loved their 'thoughts' in this chapter...so cute!! and the Utter Butter!!! HAHA! I have some of that stuff!!! BWAHAHAHAHHAA!!! it was hilarious!!! Hurry up damn it!!! I'm dying here!!!
d(^-^)b
person Puchu
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
myaaa~! Great chappie~! XDXD and so nice and looong~! *dances* please, continue soon! I so want to read more! Heck, I want to read more right now! XDXDXD SOON!!! *ties you to your chair and forces you to write* j/k j/k

But please, I beg of you, do continue soon!

Lovely chappy in an amazing fic. Long live Chasing Naruto. ^__^
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is amazingly well written. I've been sat here for the last couple of hours thoroughly engrossed. Every time I think Sasuke's getting somewhere you add another little twist (and I die of frustration!). The bath scene had me squealing like a little girl, thinking, "But it can't be this easy - he's going to mess it up!" and then - gah! You're such a tease....

I'm a new Naruto fan, so I'm not entirely sure how in or out of character anyone is, really. Although at times Sasuke did seem like a bit of a sissy with the horse (he's worse than me). I'm wondering what Neji and Gaara will get up to when they return and since they're going to a show on...Friday there are obviously several more twists up your sleeve, Akai-sensei. I'm very much looking forward to them!

If you could add me to the email update list, I would be very grateful. My address is available on my profile. Thankies for an amazing fic!
person A-K
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just wanted to let you know I'm really enjoying this...so much!!! I got really excited when I saw the update!! I actually squealed. Me! XD I love your style of writing, it's so lovely and nice to read. I'm not very good at critique so I'm sorry for that ^^; but your Authors note said to review, and I want you to continue with this (its one of the best fics I've read ^^) so I did! Thankyou for making such a captivating fic *___*
Love A-K xx
person Myuki-chan
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn yooooooooooou. lol
Although I can't say I didn't suspect it was a fantasy. XD
Just tell him, Sasuke you idiot! There's just that problem with his pride getting in the way.

And why do I have a feeling that Sasuke's going to eventually screw everything up by mentioning the whole bet with Neji and Gaara? XD
person Kelly
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh.... getting impatient... when'z that gonna happen... thatz like torture... I pity Sasuke... Anywayz... really love the fic.... please keep updating, Loving to see "every step forward"

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