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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The more I read your fanfic the more I like it :).
I'm not fond of the Gaara/Neji thing, but I love how you make Naruto turn Sasuke crazy... ^^ And horse-riding was sure an original idea...
But the next day Sasuke will suffer like hell lol... Even a good massage would have a hard time getting ride of all the cramp ^^
Anyway, I love the cat and mice game the two of them play... ^^
PS, do you know where I could find the song you used, "Feline American Princess", I totally didn't knew it and I would love to listen it, it's very funny .
I'm not fond of the Gaara/Neji thing, but I love how you make Naruto turn Sasuke crazy... ^^ And horse-riding was sure an original idea...
But the next day Sasuke will suffer like hell lol... Even a good massage would have a hard time getting ride of all the cramp ^^
Anyway, I love the cat and mice game the two of them play... ^^
PS, do you know where I could find the song you used, "Feline American Princess", I totally didn't knew it and I would love to listen it, it's very funny .
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It took me a while to read all the chapters, but I did it....*pants for air*
*clears throat* Anyways, I'm a big Sioux fan already. I really like the way she 'thinks'. *waves banners*
Ah, and poor Sasuke. I bet he's going to end up crazy and ready for the loonybin after a weekend with Naruto.
You really turned the blond dobe in a tease. I luv it. *thumbs up*
I really, really hope you update soon... *begging puppy eyes*
You're one of my fave's already. *cheers*
*clears throat* Anyways, I'm a big Sioux fan already. I really like the way she 'thinks'. *waves banners*
Ah, and poor Sasuke. I bet he's going to end up crazy and ready for the loonybin after a weekend with Naruto.
You really turned the blond dobe in a tease. I luv it. *thumbs up*
I really, really hope you update soon... *begging puppy eyes*
You're one of my fave's already. *cheers*
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this, your doinga remarkable job with pov and such. Keep up the good work, cnat wait for the next chapter.
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I absolutely adore it! I can't wait for the next chaper!
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this is really good. The chapters are longer so nothings really wrong anymore lol! BUT, it would be much better if we readers were to see a update twice a week. Once a week is not enough, and the more i read the longer i cna't wait. So....yea update faster lady!!!! lol just playing ^_^ (though it would be nice)
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked these updates, especially how you put the horses point of veiw into play. I liked to see my Shika soon too ^_^
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. my. god. I love you. ^__^ This story has me so hooked it isn't even funny. This is definately one of my favs. Everything is so incredibly well written. It's a nice change to read stuff that is as lovely and detailed as all of this is. There have been times where I just burst out laughing...like when Sasuke is freaking out about riding a horse. XP So OOC, but if you really think about the actual Sasuke thinking stuff like that....so funny. I love how Naruto seems to be (or will be?) the seme at this point. So awesome. You don't really see that often.
My only comoplaint....POST MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!! ^__~
My only comoplaint....POST MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!! ^__~
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, the last part of this chapter is so sweet. Sasuke seeing Naruto before falling sleep..ADORABLE! But I really did think that Naruto was in there with him. Grrr. Poor Neji and Gaara, I think we know fo real, which relationship Naruto wants to be in now. And the baby-cuddling part was hilarious. Was it a butt squeeze? Or a butt pat. x) I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Honestly, I'm not generally a fan of jealousy as a plot device, but your delivery is just awesome. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. (Will you put me on your email notification list?) I'm especially enjoying all the cuddly moments between Naruto and Sasuke lately. I like how even though Sasuke agreed to the bet and is determined to seduce Naruto he doesn't seem to realize that it's actually him that's being pursued. Naruto is so sneaky. :)
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you made me actually want to read...that is a VERY good comment from me. I love the way you do different points of view and how you tell the person's feeling. That last chapter was soo cute with Naruto and Sasuke. Keep up the GREAT work and plz wrrte more and update soon! ^_^