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well i liked wat u wrote abt, but i'm not to sure that i really really liked it.Um...... i don't think i like sasuke's jealousy and attitude, well i love his attitude but i mostly meant i diidn't like when he's jealous. other than that the fic was good, try updating another chapter, or r u going to update another chapter?Just curious.

P.S where's the females in the story(except sakura)
Hey i'm a teen trying to do my thing.
Really hard to get through. nice story. keep up with the good work.

My dear author, all I can say is 'wow'. You have an anazing talent, and no I am not just here to stoke your ego. You really do. Sentence structure, grammar, spelling, and plot were great. This is a very beautiful piece of work, and really look forward to seeing it through. Although, seeing the end would mean it has ended. That really sucks, but you know what they say about all good things, ne?

I wanted to give you props. to for the little trail ride...LOL. I ride and train horses, and you did an amazing job in discribing it. AND, even though the characters are OCC at times, you mingled there 'true' natures lovely. Seeing Sasuke want to pee himself from riding almost made me piss my pants! And Naruto and scary movies???? *Holds in belly laughs*...and not even touching ghost busters! Also, I liked to takes on the darker aspects of the boys lives...Sasuke with the fire, Naruto and the being alone...Gaara and his family ties. It's a rare treat to find an AU fic and acutally enjoy it.

Thanks again for putting so much time and effort into this. I can see it means a lot to you, thanks for sharing. Hope to see an update soon.

SeveredWings

fuck, fuck, fuck, i hate when sasuke ruins naruto's times with neji, and yet, i hate when sasuke hangs out with naruto and the fact that he is going home with him?????????? Its ok to see Gaara and neji, esp neji, but the hell with sasuke go out with sakura, do something what a virgin would do.(not have sex )Sasuke ur becoming to be a bitch. oh, soon ur gonna be my fuckin asswipe.*she chuckles and walks into the mist* *she trips on a rock and bleed then she rises like a phoenix rising from it's ashes* i hope its sasuke's ashes but hopes he aint coming back. I LOVE UR STORY, DONT MIND WAT I WROTE, THATS HOW I FEEL ABT SASUKE, LIKE A POEM I WROTE.

Please finish this is the best NauSas i've read in awhile!!!

I totally DOUBT any of the thousand reviews you've reseaved so far are flames!!! This story is really good! Really tense, but that's what keeps me interested! Though I kinda feel REALLY sorry for Naruto, Sasuke, Neji AND Garra. They're having a hard time establishing proper stable relationships. Is the moral of this story how troublesome it is if you're gay or something?(=^.^=) Love your story!

Hmm. Nothing wrong with the fiction except there is a problem with your tense. "A low growl from the taller boy reverberated against his lips, and Sasuke found himself walked backward until his back hit a tree." I think it should be "A low growl from the taller boy reverberated against his lips, and Sasuke found himself walking backwards until his back hit a tree."

Yup. That should be about it! I love your fiction! Keep going! I want to know the very last chapter soon! :D

grar! *pounces* vit was so goooooooooooooddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^______________________^ i want an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *glare* lol. jk. it was aswesome. good job. i wa laughing so hard i almost fell out of my chair!!!!!!

OMG. that was such a good fic. It had me groaning when they got so close to telling each other, just to be interrupted. It was such a twisting storyline, one that i could never think up. So good. You made the characters so alive, so dynamic, it was hard to stop reading... and i didn't. It's midnight now, and i have finals tomorrow *sweatdrops* but who cares? I would have stayed up later to finish it. I loved this fic so far, and i really hope you update soon.

You're amazing! dammit you're really good! Update soon! okay? I'm dying to wait for your updates and I'm glad i didn't miss this fic, its like missing half of my life! keep up the good work! ja!ü

FINALLY managed to dig myself out from underneath all this homework and read the update! And I was not disappointed. ^_^ The whole thing about Naruto not being able to angst, and Elmo with an uzi.. Great. And I totally think it's possible to angst over your ass. Well, maybe. Heh. I'll also have you know that the "Sexiness" music from Naruto started playing while Sasuke and Naruto were snogging. I nearly woke up my roommate with my laughing. >_> At any rate, I really like what you did with Naruto finding out about the bet. What you did seemed more his style than like, say, getting totally ticked and storming off and not speaking to them for a month, or whatever. And.. his dancing.. with the broom.. and the hairstyle. Oh my gawd. Heh. I cannot wait to see what you're having him plot (with Sakura) for the next chapter! And to see how Gaara and Neji (with TenTen ;) are faring. Oh, and how Sakura takes Sasuke being off the market. Eagerly awaiting the next update!