rate_review Reviews

I've just read your fanfiction from chapt 1 to the most recent chapter in two days. From the first paragraph I was completely hooked.

Now I don't normally write reviews for fanfics, but I think u deserve some praise ^^
I've read a LOT of SasuNaru/NaruSasu fanfictions, but I think this one stood out quite a bit. The developing feelings between the two were not solely based on looks (though Naruto might object), it also built itself from their years of 'hidden' friendship. A lot of stories I've read base it only on sexual desire, but u've stepped away from that.^^
I love how Naruto is portrayed in this story, he's not the completely clueless (but very cute) clutz that fanfic author's love to write him as (though I do like him like that), I though this fic was a refreshing change. We DO know that Naruto is not completely clueless, as he shows that in the manga/anime. I liked how you've played with that a little more. However, you've made Naruto SO complex that Sasuke doesn't seem to be complex enough, I think that Sasuke will always be more hard to understand than anyone in the show. Then again, like I said, its a refreshing change.

At first, I did not like the idea of Gaara and Neji courting Naruto (as he solely belongs to no one but Sasuke). However, at soon as you put in the history behind them, I warmed up to it immediately (I loved the whole Romeo and Juliet play behind Neji). Plus it wouldn't have been interesting if not for the competition between them, heh. Though it does make me sad that the two of them will be heart-broken in the end...
P.S. That was a cruel joke that u put out for chapt two *shudders at the thought of Naruto and Lee together*

Anyways, I thought everyone was portrayed quite well in the story. There was a few random OOC moments here and there. I was especially aware that Sasuke got very...flustered sometimes (which 'I' think is very OOC, but made it quite amusing actually).
Oh and the humour? You've given me stomach aches for the past couple of days! I've been laughing hysterically and making my whole family question my sanity. The last few chapters nearly had me rolling on the ground, just imagining Naruto, Sasuke, Neji, and Gaara dressed up like that..........*insert drool and nosebleeds*

All in all, fantastic fic!
I look forward to the last and final chapter!

Hullo,

I just wanted to let you know that I read this fic of yours today and that even though it's really not my usual style, I have enjoyed it immensely up until now. I don't usually read AU epics, especially when they're still in progress but I'm definitely glad that I decided to read this one.

I'm glad though that I only caught on this late in the story, 'cause I don't think I could have stood all that dratted sexual tension otherwise! Anyhow, I think that you've done a very good job with this story. Your characters are fairly different from the characters we know from the anime/manga, but in your fic I don't think that it's a bad thing at all. The story is enjoyable and I like how you've managed to integrate these characters into this story. Congratulations on a job well done, and I look forward to the last chapter and the epilogue!

AMG! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon. This is one of my fav Naruto fics! I can't get enough kek.

OMG, That was great! How did you come up with the idea? You were able to place them in an entirely different epic and it was great! I love it! Please e-mail me when you post the next chapter, PLEASE! Thanks!

Sincerely,

Jolene

heart UUUUUU! WHEN ISH TEH NEXT CHA;P COMING OUT? WHEN!!?? *crys*

This is an amazing story. I love your writing style. Drama kills me, but for this I was willing to stick it out. I'm looking forward to an update. Keep up the phenomenal work, for it ish luffed.

Wonderful Story! I loved how cunning Naruto is at times, and how clueless Sasuke was. Please tell me you're going to update soon? I have no complants about the format, or anything else you may come up with. I loved the story!

damm itttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was so hotttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^____^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update!update!please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I beg you

sweeeeeeet, two chapters to read! omt, everything is coming together,crashing down, and picking itself back up but in a better order!! i was worrying, biting my nails, giggling giddily, gasping, and all around cheesy grinning most of the way... so much drama!! so much!! good and bad!! naruto's memory about sasuke trying to kill himself, sasuke's realization about his stalker-like "photo study" of naruto, and finally both of them realizing their true feelings.. just to mention a bit.. i absolutely love it, and can't wait to see how it ends, yet don't want it to end.. EVER!! lol

so as usual, i was doing quite a bit of quoting to nic... here's some of what i said/quoted in that IM (my normal comments are italic, and when i commented after a quote it's in parentheses):
"woooooooooooooooooooooooot dude yeah go naruto! lol kiss sasuke's brains out!" .... "Wondering idly if Elmo ever wanted to take an Uzi to Sesame Street (rofl)" ...

“Heavens, no. I’m God’s gift to myself. After all, I have to look at myself in the mirror.”

“And car windows, and store windows, and puddles of water, and—”

Naruto punched him back. “I’m not that bad.” He waited. “Puddles make my features muddy.” (lol!!) ...

"Ah HAH! If he went and tried to remove my tonsils by way of tongue before the idiot decided to “officially” vie for my attention...that means that he has to have feelings for me. Naruto tapped his chin thoughtfully. And, since he didn’t know he’d already won, he went against his all-important word to kiss me again after the drag show. (yay!!! *is trying soooooooo hard not to get all hypergiggly*)" ... "*failing miserably* lmaooooo naruto talking to himself and admiring himself in the mirror" ... "Sighing, he stepped into the bathroom. Man, I suck at being angsty. I’m supposed to be mad at the world, not fussing over my ass. His frowned at his reflection in the mirror. Can you angst over your ass? (lmaooo only you, naruto, only you!)" ... "The brunette shook his head. How about... “I think you’re gorgeous, you think I’m gorgeous...oh my, is that a bed?” ...NO. (rofl rofl rofl!!!)" ... "OMFTEZZIE GHOSTBUSTERS!!!!?????!!!!" ... "Note to self: Stupidity breeds phenomenal kissers." (heehee)

oh and kiba coming in at that exact moment when they were REALLY gettin into it?? soooo frustrating, yet so perfect somehow lol, loved that they didn't even realize the door was wide open until he called their attention to it!! roflmfao!!

*sigh* well as much as i dread this fic actually ENDING i can't wait for the next chapter!! *huggles* *cheers* yay! sasuke loves naruto, naruto loves sasuke!!

~ crys

Please update this soon. I enjoy it so much. I am waiting patiently, though. Don't want to rush good work. Have fun writing!