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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person nicole
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i;m glad you updated
person aiimeru
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmn, i've been reading ur story from the begining, and i'm really sorry that i haven't reviewed in a while. I like the story in all, it's nice and you have the characters just right, hehe with very interesting personalities. I also can't wait to see the next chapter! :D

um.. but, you do seem a bit odd to me this time, you aren't as cheery. I don't mean anything by it tho! just.. i hope you get better. ^--^

Well good luck with the writing! Bai!
person Manda-Kun
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROAR! I LOVE IT! This is my favorite fanfic. Its updates are like me getting the dose of a drug or something. I don't know, didn't come out right. But I just love this. THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!
person MiyaJadecube
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...if it isn't Orochimaru (sp?) himself...have to admit that I didn't see him creeping by. *giggles* Got to luv Sasuke's pervy employers...XD Anyway, I think it was a decent chappy, and I'll take your word for it that it was a "much needed transition" for the story. I'm sort of wondering where things are heading at this point, I thought I had things figured a few chapters back, yet now...*rubs chin* I have to admit that I was all girly during the whole WalMart scene. *grins madly* Naruto checking out Sasuke's butt...oye...the mental image of that one. =^.^=~~ And Sasuke's secret luv of the unsalted pretzel...Ohahahaha! Great stuff...*sighs* Made my afternoon.

Hope your current writers slump dissipates in time...But sometimes focusing on something else for a moment, to come back later. is all you may need...Although I don't want the fangirls rioting about me encouraging you to ditch CN for any length of time either...*looks around nervously* Se La Vi! Go have some pocky and call it a night...*winks*

~Miya
person animegirl
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay i'm so glad your back, i was so happy to see another chapter, i LOVE your story! i'm glad to see that naruto's and sasuke's realtionship is starting to progress, and that kiss scene was sooooo sweet!!! but really, ya gotta give us more then that! i don't know how much more i can take, naruto better jump sasuke soon or i'm beat him over the head with my frying pan, hehe! normally i don't like the hetro parings in naruto but i think that neji and tenten are a really good match in this fic and i hope then end up together. i hope garra finds someone else as well, i love him to death and he deserves some lovin to! but please, whatever you do, don't set him up with Lee, that paring just seems wrong to me *shudders* anyway keep up the fab writing and give us another great chapter to read!
person Kelly
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I kinda like this chapter you know... I like that when Naruto said, "For one night, you belong to me, and Im taking advantage of that", I sense something happening smoothingly, lovable... sweet in the future~ Hahahahaha! What happen what happen next!?!?!?!????
I WANNA KNOW!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, I LOVE YOUR FANFICTION A LOT!!!!! >.<
person paleostupid
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovethisfic! sorry me lazzy not review but now on every chapter gets one ... this my favorite love it wanna read more .check avery week ^^
person jigglyjellosocks
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HUZZAH!! another fab chapter!I lurvey lurve this fic so much!!!!!Just makes my day!u know why? cus its so suspenseful and never bores me! So many events in one chappie!i wish i could give ya some ideas but i really cant think of nuthin! but yanno you's got some major talent there.you can make the story long and all yet exciting and i just wanna read more and more!Rock on!
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cracked up when I read Sasuke loved unsalted pretzels! It was great because I also have a soft spot for them. Naruto could buy Sasuke pretzels for Valentines, lol.

Dare I say it, but is Neji moving on? I'm glad for him. I actually do feel sorry for him and Gaara because of how unrequited their feelings are. TenTen would be good for Neji and she already gets him into active (and really interesting) discussions. I wonder if Gaara will ever find someone. My inner fangirl wants him either in a lonely unsocial existence or a loving relationship with Naruto.

And Naruto! For however smart he seems to be (I think of his journal), he is really in denial. I turned into a pile of mush when sleepy!adorable!Sasuke asked Naruto to kiss him. Awww. :>
person mike
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story so far. Hope you update soon.

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