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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person dAni3Lr
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL~* neji found himself a new interest to keep him going!! I wonder what will Gaara do abt sasuke though.. very little abt gaara's behaviour :( but naruto n sasuke's relationship are going on very well!! please keep it up!! XD
person kataru
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahahaha...... tommorow.... @_@ i wonder what will naruto-kun do to that slutty uchiha..... yayayayaaaaay~
person lily
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good fic ^^
person Angel
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this chatper was very interesting. I can't wait to see where naruto will take sasuke! Please update soon.
person blisblop
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Perhaps you are getting tired of this because its race is run?How long are they gonna tease for?I like this don't get me wrong I love the heat but it seems stretched,I am probably wrong.Looking forward to your next peice.
person theantigravity
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! I check it almost every day for updates, rooting on Naruto and Sasuke. I'm always amazed by your writing and I cant wait for more chapters! Please dont drop this story *begs*

I thought non writers couldnt comment, but not that i know they can, ill comment on your shibby work mroe often!!!!! <3

Hearts and awe,
TheAntiGravity
person Mercedes
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing the other chapters! It took me forever to find this fic since last time I reviewed it. ^_^

*squeals and send you flowers and cookies and plushies* Naruto kissed him! I know that's what you're getting the most reviews about, but.... Naruto KISSED him!!! *fangirls* And that whole scene was too cute and shows us that Sasuke needs to stop trying so hard and just say what he's had on the tip of his tongue all this time. ^_^

Also, HUGE loves for bringing in TenTen! Neji needed a distraction, but you didn't make her seem that way. Her appearance feels natural and you have my full approval bringing her into the story. ^_^

BTW, Gaara is still a freaky guy, sad history or no. I like how you explained him and his crush on Naruto, though that doesn't stop me from wanting to run for the hills. ^.~

Don't lose hope! Especially not when you're so CLOSE! I adore this story and I go all fangirly whenever I see a new chapter. ^_^
person Metranome
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If I could write like you....Sigh. I'm such a freakin' amateur, and it bugs me. My stuff is always too rushed, or too unimaginative, or too broad with descriptions of people and places. The fact that I know what's wrong with my writing style doesn't make it any easier to fix, either. Anyway, I am still psyched about your fic, and I hope to see more soon. This last one left me seriously wondering. :)
person reesexsooxfly
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to see what happens at the show...although i cant remember when naruto mention about a show but oh well! lol
person Stranj100
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this because I'm still getting a real kick out of it.

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