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I absolutely loooooove this story!!! How you capitalize on Sasuke's inner turmoil regarding his feelings for Naruto is wonderful. (Case in point-the scene with Naruto trying to get the book in the library with Sasuke in the way was priceless!) I really enjoy the pacing of this story as well. As much as I may want nothing better than to read some steamy narusasu smut, I don't think your plan is to have them suddenly jump into bed together (but I could be wrong). But hopefully, when the time is right, you'll give us some hot Naruto on Sasuke action! I still wonder though...does Naruto honestly have no idea of Sasuke's feelings? He even admitted to himself that he flirts with him. Anyways, I can not wait for the next chapter. I have become a loyal and dedicated reader. (I also loved "Breaking Sasuke".) I will be anxiously awaiting more narusasu action! (Btw...Sasuke with green briefs gave me a hilarious mental image!!!)

Agh! So many nasty cliffhangers! LOL.

heheheh... so naruto might be the one doing the chasing soon, ne? :3.... heehee, neji needs to get better control of his brains, its no good when they randomly malfunction like that *nods*... but then again he was headbanging at a concert o.o which is a scary mental image... it really is.... hehehe, finally this chapter had the scene i was looking for! with the green undies ^^ sasuke has the cruddiest luck.. but then i suppose it will be made up for in the end.... ^.^ . ooh.. i have a question.. did sasuke's face creak when he grinned? those muscles have gotta be rusty by now......

haha!! that was sooo good! nyaaa XD I like Kiba's last comments. Smart Naruto's so cute especially since most people don't expect him to be, makes it more fun. Heeheee...

OMG i love ur story! the writing the plot everything!!! i can't wait for the other chapters i love ur story it's one of my offical best stories i have ever read! u r amazing pleas continue and update soon i can't wait!!!!!!!

LOL I love this fic ^^ waiiii :D :D :D :D :D Okay, so I when I came to aff and saw your fic was updated, I was like, I can't read this yet. I love this fic too much. If I read it, it'll be over and I'll want the next chapter right then. So instead, I just talked to my friend and then went to class. Lol...I just got back and couldn't resist...what a great chapter. I'm SOOOOO glad that Neji wasn't able to kiss Naruto on his lips :D I mean, I love Neji. He's great. But.......I don't want Naruto to be with Neji :'( I don't want Gaara to be with Naruto either :'( NaruSasu rules ^^ I'm so glaaaaad that you don't portray Naruto as a sissy! YES! lol You have great characterization for all the characters... I have to admit, I love that line in chapter 2 where you wrote how Gaara touched his nose and checked for a nosebleed lol. That was really really great. You can look but can't touch :D Naruto is special... Sasuke's a bastard... but... I'm all for NaruSasu...how hypocritic! ^^ Anyway, I love your fic. I cannot wait for you to update it. Go you! Go fic! Great writing style :D

Hey! That was wonderful! Extremely enjoyable, and I laughed aloud a couple times as well. Very awesome AU fic. Of course, you gotta love this pairing. And I think your write very well, too. Everyone seems to be in character, so it's fabulously believable ^_^ Great job! PLEASE update soon!!! You're killing me here....is this gonna be...a lemon? Eventually...? *crosses fingers* Keep it up. It's fantastic!! <3

sauke/naruto pairing is always hot! naruto domiance is working for me too. write more soon!

hello mother!!!! ^v^ ... you gave me the wrong story *poke poke*, the one you were telling me about was 'breaking sasuke', not this one! >< .. heh, i still loved it tho'. i like your writing style alot, i wish i could write like that ;.;... you almost had me dying laughing though *nods* good stuff ^^. I wasn't expecting all of them to be after naruto o.o, he's a man magnet!!!!! ^^ anyway, it was happy, and i shoved it at my buddy cat-chan, who also liked it (even tho i don't think she's even seen naruto.....). and now i must go forth and read breaking sasuke! *runs off*

I love you! This story is funny and has Sasuke-torture and competetion! Everything I ever wanted. Thank you, thank you so much.