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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the joke at the beginning but that cliff hanger was just pure evil! It's an awesome story though. I love it. The characters and plot are nicely developed. Keep it up!
Bianca ;P
Bianca ;P
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE LET THE SASUXNARU SCREWING?LEMONS COME SOON
and keep up the good work will it only be sasu naru
and keep up the good work will it only be sasu naru
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That..Now that is amazing!! *dies of wonderment*
Nice writing style, clear and concise, further overlayed
by layers of complexity within the characters. I love how
you gave the characters of Naruto a new perspective,
a depth, you could call it. Wonderfully done.
The susupense is killing me.
Muuuusttt reaaaddd onnnnnnnnnnnn....
LOOOVE!! (I can't wait for the next chapter!)
~michi~
Nice writing style, clear and concise, further overlayed
by layers of complexity within the characters. I love how
you gave the characters of Naruto a new perspective,
a depth, you could call it. Wonderfully done.
The susupense is killing me.
Muuuusttt reaaaddd onnnnnnnnnnnn....
LOOOVE!! (I can't wait for the next chapter!)
~michi~
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs*
*grabs a marker and writes*
"i was here and read your fic"
*grabs a marker and writes*
"i was here and read your fic"
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what flames? ^______^ i'm really likin' this. very niiice.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke, please don't misunderstand! ;___;
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
R U mad!!?? Flames??? Gawd that was the FUNNIEST april fools ever... Anyhoo, again a masterpiece... cant wait 4 da update... ^^
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:: sighs :: i just love this story. so good, so sexy, keep up the good work. I can't wait till the next chapter
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The ending was predictable.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa wonder what sasuke's gona do to neji next. probli beat the shit out of him. cant wait for next chapter