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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person evil
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah!! "Oh shit.." Naruto better be saying "Oh shit" 'cause SASUKE WANTS TO KEEELLL HIM AND NEJI FIRST!! BUWHAHA!! Keep going with your story, damnit! I love itt!! ^___^
person MultifacetedTune
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, OMG, OMG!!!!!!! *spazzes* That was just so amazing!!! (evil, too, but still.......) ^___~ I can't wait to find out what happens!!! Please, please, pleeeeease update soon!!! This site may be shutting down soon, and I reeeeeally want (need) to know what happens!!! ^^ Thanks so much for updating, and keep up the good work!!!
person AkaiTsume
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naruto's "obliviousness" is going to be called into question. How much of it is real, and how much is only expected? A guy could get away with a lot if people don't realize he's paying attention...
person turtledonkey27
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh shit is right! D'OH!!! everyone's ready to kill over this oblivious adorable blond!
loving it!
person Fan
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL- oh, that's MEAN... More Please!!!!!
person kai
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you scared me there!!! lee and naruto, noo!!! don't do that!! but anyways, great update!! i see a fight coming on!! sasuke vs neji!!! fufufufufufu!!! update soon!!
person Yoruko
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn right you should run from flames! *grumps* It was finally getting somewhere, and then - and then! Evil cliffhanger. *pouts*

Anyway, yes, jealous Sasuke was adorable. Neji was extremely cute without being horribly OOC, and some of Gaara's internal observations downright made me giggle. Sasuke melting so much at a backrub was also perfect and well done. I commend you highly, and avidly await for more.

This is, quite honestly, the best high school fic I've ever read. Don't stop here! ^_^

~Chel
person lalala
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Cliff hanger!!!!
person kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in)
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don't do flames, but you damn well better update asap. i'll love ya if you do.

plus i love your story so far and i hope you cont. with it^_^V
person Letta
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If I were a lesser person, I'd be squealing like a banshee right now. This is probably my favorite chapter so far, what with the nearly naked Naruto and very jealous Sasuke. I definately can't wait for the next part! A cliffhanger like that is just so evil! Yet so good... This is one of the few stories were I honestly feel that after every chapter, it wasn't enough, and then I'm stuck waiting for a few days with this story in the back of my mind. At least you update quickly, I don't know what I'd do if you didn't.

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