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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story is there going to be more to it or is that it please tell me theres going to be more. oh at the end u had naruto say its happened before if thers going to be more can u write about how itachi first got with naruto pleeeeeeease with a cherry on top. well i;ll just have to wait and see like all the others right, right!
UNTIL THE NEXT TIME BYE BYE!!
UNTIL THE NEXT TIME BYE BYE!!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Weeee!I can't wait to read the rest of this,it is very enticing.
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool!!! So does that mean you will update Kawaru on AFF.net too?
It's a good piece of work!!! Can't wait to read the rest!!!
I think I'll stop here!! (whaou!!! for once I did not write an essay's lenght review ;D)
CONTINUE!!!
It's a good piece of work!!! Can't wait to read the rest!!!
I think I'll stop here!! (whaou!!! for once I did not write an essay's lenght review ;D)
CONTINUE!!!
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello, but can we say "HOT!" dang....Itachi was dang sexy and from Naruto's POV too. I don't know about other people but that was a very lemony scene. It needs some more background information but it's pretty good piece of writing.