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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love u.
So much
The lapdance was ...great. those sneaky comments inside Sasukes head are a touch of genius.
And the fact that Naruto, when assaulted by Sasuke after the party, did NOT just swoon and get fucked up the wall was both original and refreshing .
from the bottom of my heart I thank you.
Please, do carry on!
So much
The lapdance was ...great. those sneaky comments inside Sasukes head are a touch of genius.
And the fact that Naruto, when assaulted by Sasuke after the party, did NOT just swoon and get fucked up the wall was both original and refreshing .
from the bottom of my heart I thank you.
Please, do carry on!
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What does Naruto do now? He turns around, goes back inside and jumps Sasuke's bones, that's what he does! ... not letting that voice our for a while.... it's a little scary ... Good story. I like a plastered Sasuke.
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I thought i might actually die reading this....*Wipes blood from nose* I just soo much can't wait for the next chapter...please make it come soon!!! I NEEEEED it!!! *Snuggle*
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your amazing! thanks for updating! this chapter rocked!
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Sasuke, getting rejected like that. Naruto is sooo clueless its sad. Nice description of the lap dance scene(my favorite ^_^) and I think I like bumbling Sasuke. Let's see if this gets Naruto to come around. I hope you don't fry so many brain cells you can't put out another chapter! Ciao!
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! Go you!!! ^___^ *gives you chocolates* ...you know, for creativity, and all....... ^___~ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! I can't wait to find out what happens!!!!!
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the comments! I love constructive feedback: why you liked it, what you think could change, etc. If you see problems, feel free to drop me a line.
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! >.< HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER! THIS IS SO DAMN HOT! >.<
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kyaaa!!! sasuke did have a break down! LOL. And the lap dance XD hahaha....great chapter! i loved it!
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KEEEEEEEP GOING !!! ooo naughty sasuke... ahhahahahha