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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
xD Well you already knwo what I think... sequel... umh... yeah u better leave RIKU in a better position xD or else you'll die
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cliffhanger XD. Having fun tormenting us there ;3?
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...aww man will be a sequel? Cause it seem so depressing leaving Sasuke there alone. maybe you should make it into a multi chapter in your sequel, and HOPEFULLY it would be Naru/Sasu...but really, are you going to leave Sasuke raped by that*******. man : teareyed: please continue? ^-^
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, both of them yearning for someone who isn't there...kinda poetic justice. I wouldn't mind seeing a sequel, or you could leave it as-is. The imagery on Sasuke's part was really good.
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wah! that was so saaaaaad! please write a sequal and make things all better! pleasepleaseplease! actually any sequal would do. your writing is really very good! i really hope you write a sequal! that would be awesome!