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Ahh I've enjoyed this story marvelously!! After i started reading it i just couldn't stop clicking next =D In one of the earlier posts it said something about a BETA? If you still need one I'd love to volunteer for the job! I love your story and being able to read it before others would be a major plus =D Lol i love your style and where you're taking the story so keep up the good work! And no worriez about almost giving up, cuz the keyword is almost, but you are back and i'm sure all your fans are jumping up and down waving pom poms spastically over their heads because of it ^_~ I look forward to reading more of your work! Ja ne!! Always, Kerrisa

Gah! I'm so glad you updated *loves you to death*. I love this story more than anytother, it's what inspires me to write. I liked this chappie too. When Naruto told Neji, I was, like, "Nuuu...". I hope they stay together ;__ ; Neji and Naru go so well together in this story. Wee! Thanks again!

YAY i'm so glad you decided to continue this story I really like it. Please tell me this is still a nejinaru cause that's the only reason im so into it. And i think you are doing a great job. Keep up the good work and update soon please.

Neji is such a bastard in this chapter....lol. Very excellent chapter, you've outdid yourself in this one! Out of the rest of the chapters, this one made my heart hurt so badly at Neji's cold response after Naruto's confession and I really began to tear for Naruto when he returned home. You've got a really awesome gift for this story and I hope you'll someday update soon.

By the way, where did you get all these clothing ideas for Narto and the rest of the characters, because you have great fashion taste ^^. I wouldn't mind wearing those kinds of clothes... As for the book Naruto received from Neji, I wonder what's in it... I can't wait for the next chapter, I know you'll have some sort of solution on to what might make Neji apologize to Naruto or something... Or maybe you'll allow Sasuke to make his move on Naruto? Or maybe you'll decide on Gaara to be with Naruto or Sasuke?

So many questions, I'm sure they'll be answered by your wonderful writing skills later on in the future chapters. In the meanwhile, keep up the wonderful work. Until then.

-Elk

Also, since AFF.net won't display emails on the second top thing, i'll leave it here:

bombay_229@hotmail.com

Please email me once you've updated so I may instantly review when I receive your notice ^^.

omgsh.. how sad! neji's reaction was.. sad.. TT.TT but i certainly hope (now anyways ^^;;) that it ends neji/naru.. but i don't want a gaa/sasu. is that so wrong? i mean.. i dunno what i'm saying.. =] update soon!

Awesome story. I wish I could find more naruto highschool fics with NarutoNejiSasukeGaara love triangles. And my fav pairing is NaruNeji so I will still keep reading this story. I can't wait to see what you do with it. Hope you update soon.

This is just simply a wonderful story, I like how this is made like Naruto's PoV and I love how he's been chased by three guys!! :D I'm not really NaruNeji fan but this made me reconsider it, since I've red too much SasuNaru fics, so this is really refreshing..Not to mention NaruGaara...Sigh, I just love how you've made Gaara..He's sooo cool character here...*dreams about Gaara's smirks* It's nice that you don't focus only just one pairing and their relationship..I really CAN'T decide which pairing would be better...But I get really sad if Gaara gets rejected badly...(omg, I'm not even talking really about the fic here..sorry.. xD rewieving is really Not my thing but I do it anyway..)
Hopefully you'll be able to update this soon, I didn't thought the characters were OOC and I know it's really hard to be faithful to the chars..
I just need to say I totally cracked laughing when I read this Gaara's comment; “There’s a lump on your sofa that mumbles when you poke it”
It was just somehow so hilarious...and the lump being Sasuke...I really like this fic... ;P

please don't change your story - i really like it the way it is!!!!! i like how urs is like a refreshing change w/ all the characters OC but still retaining enuf of the original characteristics to remain recognizable. DON"T CHANGE THE STORY AND PLEASE UPLOAD

since you're changing some of the chapter's would it kill you to send me a note, or past one with your a/n's so that i know what exactly you changed in which chapters, just so i know what to read... I'm to lazy to find it all out myself... and since you're the author...
anyways, i just want you to know that I like your story so far, but everybody's doing a sort of neji+sasuke+gaara chaising naruto thing... so be careful with what you write and keep it original with their developing rivaly.
Ummm, well good luck with rewriting then... don't change it too much.

x Mar