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person yoroshiku
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pout* why do these fics allways stop so abruptly??? Updates. Now. Pronto.
person Liliath
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH~~~~~~!!!!!OMG OMG OMG!!!YOU BETTER FUCKING UPDATE THIS IS JUST SO GREAT AND COOL AND OMG OMFG AND I NEVER EXPECTED THAT YOU'D LET SASUKE DO THAT TO NARUTO SO SOON BUT OMG JUST UPDA~~~TE~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!>.<
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Sasuke is already molesting Naruto?! ANd I thought he was going to do that when he takes Naruto to his room for the "interview" I can't wait until the next chapter! *jumps in a field of yaoi doujinshis* ~o~
person Snnell
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yummy!! but the cliff-hanger.. *tears welling up* pls update soon..
person peanut
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is such a horrible place to end the chapter. Anyway I don't think it will be good for Sasuke to get what he wants so fast, can we have Neji banging in to 'save' Naruto. Nonetheless, this is a great fic. Please update soon, k.
person clowangel
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh.. That last part was hot! ^^ But once again, Sasuke is being an ass. Things will get better between Naruto-san and Sasuke-teme right?
person Sukara
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEE!!! *Huffs abd puffs* EKKKKKKKK!!! *Rights to take out her angry somehow* You left a cliffy, A CLIFFY!!!!!!!!!! Just when the best part was coming up!!
person Hitomi
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 2)
What do I have to say? B R I L L I A N T .
=^___^=

Though, I have one thing to bring up to you; in this chapter you said that they[Naruto and co.] were once assasins. How does that conect to their current world, and is it in any way connected to the "real" Naruto world? I don't really see the connection. If you could clear that up for me, I'd be greatful.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to a quick update. *ahem ahem*
Until then,
Ja ne~
person ayachan
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you ebil author you T_T you can't leave us like that! anyway, please update asap please!
person Ezj
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes an evil cliffhanger... but bwahahahaa they're best ^.^''
I like those little glimpses of the past thats building up
the story piece for piece... really good, waites somewhat
patiently for the next chapter

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