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for Bloody Nocturne

by chesierecat

person Liliath
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh!!!the story is sooo cool and awesome!!!!!!it'd be such a pity not to continue this!!!!!!oh pretty please with cherry on top update soon!!!!*big sad puppy eyesTM* ^^
person Liliath
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh!!!the story is sooo cool and awesome!!!!!!it'd be such a pity not to continue this!!!!!!oh pretty please with cherry on top update soon!!!!*big sad puppy eyesTM* ^^
person Absolute--
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaah...This is very nice....I don't think they're nessisarily out of character...I think it's good...(I really like that Itachi X Sasuke bit...*grins*) I would strongly suggest that you continue...Because I'll deffinatly read and review again....You have MY word, yes...

Again, I really liked that ItaSasu part...Mmmmm, brotherly love, ja...Yeah...*pokes you* Very niiice...Reminds me of a picture I've seen...But where was it...

Anway, good work. Some of your sentences were a bit off...But it was completely understandable. *nods* Yep.
person vashta
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good fic, I have been looking for a vampy Nar fic. I definitely think you should continue.
person jess
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its good continue pretty pleassse
person tsuki
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How can you even think of discontinuing this!? NO you must continue it I beg of you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Yum
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay... It's interesting so far!! I really want to know what will happpen next!!!^^ Will you introduce secondary character as Iruka or Ino or Sakura in your story? Or did you plan to only use Itachi, Sasue, Naruto and Kakashi?
person kawaii_kitsune_thief
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it, alot. As for it having been translated from another language it runs extremely smooth. I heart your Uchihacest- Which I normally don't even like, and I anxiously anticipate the next insertion.

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