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schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. o.o So Sakura got her Sasuke-kun after all, but didnt survive to see her babies. How sad. Oh well now she's out of the way lol. im sorry for that vulgar comment. :D I cant wait to see how the kids act toward
one another. I wonder if Hikari will be all over one of the Uchihas or both or not at all.:D
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG brothers that hate each other is horrible and i cant wait to see how they eventually come to at least like
one another. I like Hikari's utterance "tiresome" cuz its the same but different from her father's. How cute.XD Naruto is now understanding Kakashi's feelings somewhat about the team fighting among each other and its really funny too. XD
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know Sasuke is full of lovingly familiar emotions about 'his Naurto' but will their meeting end up in a fight?
Sasuke's so stuck in the past that he thinks Naruto's still a kid lol. He has it baaaad for 'his Naruto.':D
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved their important lesson on working together and how also they saw and understood the importance of their D-ranked mission. I cant wait to see how the relationship develops between the students and Naruto as they progress. I especially cant wait for the same between Naruto and Kenji.:D The flashbacks r great in how detailed they r about the way they used to be together. I especially loved Sasuke's explanation of why he is with Naruto and why he loves him.:D
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, I'm so glad Kenji thinks Naruto is cool and that he is excited about Naruto teaching him. I didnt expect that. He kinda reminds me of Naruto being excited about Kakashi potentially training him. Kenji is so eager if not for the motivation his brother indirectly gives him lol. I cant wait for the convo of Sasuke and Naruto.
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man I love it when you update!!! Great chapter!
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
is there a reason that naru is avoiding konohamaru? i just get that feeling.
and sasu's boys seem so much like naru and sasu lol.
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
im so glad Sasuke still wants Naruto but it seems Naruto isnt ready to commit just yet.:(
im also glad Kenji is getting training in with Kakashi.:D
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now we see why Naruto is so angry with Sasuke. Wow! That was a hard thing to do just walk away from Naruto like that. o.o
person midnight
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! YOUR NOT DEAD!!!! i'm sorry but i first read this story what seemed like years ago! i'm soo glad the plot bunnies didn't kill you. This was one of my first stories on this site and it kept me coming back!! Great to have you and your story back!!!! tee hee, off to read more! keep up the good work!

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