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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its' not horrible, short, but not horrible. hmm, and suicide is spelt without that extra c. but other than that i liked it.
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I like this chapter best out of all of them so far. Congratulations on the great hpater and I hope writers block doesn't come back because I want another one. =)
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update! *hugs* There were a few typos, but I like your style of writing. Please e-mail me when you update.
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....you did a good job on developing the charactors...I love the plot too, it's sad, but I think you will do a good job with it. More please!
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SO SAD PLEASE CONTINUE
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woooot hey it's really good! Angst!!!!! Mihihi
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it,your Nar is convincing,be careful with Sasuke he is tricky when made to be sympathetic.Good Luck.
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow.
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's not a problem to care Sasuke. Good chapter ^_^
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaah...I really almost cried again. I love the way you write drama. I also love SasuNaru. Which one is the uke? If it says NaruSasu, doesn't that mean Naruto will be the seme? That's rare. ^^ I don't recall any spelling errors. PLEASE write more, and could you please e-mail me when you update? I'd really appreciate it.