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by dragonflyelj

person animechick262003
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Sakura's giving old Itachi one hell of a run for his money. Me likes a whole lot! Oh and the scene where he grazes her ass with his dick...I wished I was her. LMAO!!! Good Job! Two more Chapters and Ill be all caught up. he...he
person Airayle
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg noo it please put out another chapter..i love this ff XD
person animechick262003
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, just finished chapter two and as always, very good. I just have one complaint. I wish there were more things Sakura didn't notice on that list of not noticing so I could enjoy not noticing things about Itachi with her just a wee bit longer. Oh well, off to chapter three.
person animechick262003
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate aff,net. I'd done this really long elaborate review of chapter one and the site ate it. >__> Oh well,I'll just have to tell you all over again just what I think of your writing. OMG!!!! I so envy you. Girl I have told you hundreds of times what a t alented writer you are, and this story just reenforces my belief. You are so descriptive. I could see Sakura's every move as she stood her ground taking on Itachi. I loved the dialogue too. It was kick ass. Well , I am going to go back to my writing, but wanted to drop you a line and let you know how much I love this story! I plan to read some mre once I'm done with the new fic. So, keep an eye open for my comments. ^__^
person kit
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story! please finish :D
person Nasis
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well worth the wait. I really love this story.
person GinaCat
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon I love it
person girl who loved your stroy and wants you to update!!
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you rock, update please. ja!! ^_^
person Menna
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol! This was great! Please update soon! If you do, can you please e-mail me and tell me????? silver_crystalyn_tears@yahoo.com
This rox mah fuzzy pink sox. ^^

~Menna
person pink Scaboo
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wowww, seriously, you ar elike, an author or something, even better then the original ones, lol. I love Sakura's personality! To me, she's so adorable! Awww


Keep it up yo!!

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