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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii!
Sooo..... When Naru-chan gonna tell Hinata-chan about Kyuubi-chan?
Sooo..... When Naru-chan gonna tell Hinata-chan about Kyuubi-chan?
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squee!! Oh, this is so awesome! Finally, she told him! Yay! I can't wait for the next chapter! Squee! So... um... when will Kyuubi make an appearence? *bounces uo and down*
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, just lovely. Keep up the good work.
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Average rating of 3 stars? I feel hurt....
Thanks to those of you who pointed out the mistakes in the terminology - I have corrected those now.
Also, thanks to those of you who have complimented my keeping Hinata and Naruto in character and my writing style.
I know there has been no serious sex, and we are 4 chapters into the story, but don't worry, there is a lot more story to come.
Thanks to those of you who pointed out the mistakes in the terminology - I have corrected those now.
Also, thanks to those of you who have complimented my keeping Hinata and Naruto in character and my writing style.
I know there has been no serious sex, and we are 4 chapters into the story, but don't worry, there is a lot more story to come.
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beatiful! T_T It almost brings tears to my eyes. It's so rare to even have a fanfic that is NarutoxHinata, and a great one at that! This story is pulling me in and the story development is amazing. The characters are "in character" and it's very believable. Keep making chapters!! I would have to say this is one of my favorite FanFics.
Keep updating!! ^ ^
Keep updating!! ^ ^
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, if only a tad short chapterwise, still you have the setting and description down and good feel for the characters.
Now hurry up and update!
:-D
Now hurry up and update!
:-D
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I'm so thrilled to see a Naruto/Kyuubi/Hinata story XD And it's a really great one too! THe plot's interesting and it's well-written too. Hinata and Naruto seem in character and you make them seem natural but cute together. I hope you're going to update regularly, because I'm definately going to nag you if you don't. *goes to bookmark*
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!Naruto/Hinata fic!!Meh..no graphic scenes yet and four chapters already nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Bleh, update soon please!
Bleh, update soon please!
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude! This has got to be one of the best Hinata/Naruto fics I've read in a while, I can't wait for the next update! Tis teh awesomeness! ^_~
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very funny story. You're making a very cute plot. I liked chapter 3 a lot, and I liked how you made Hinata sound so professional in chapter 2. I just wish they were a bit older, because the idea of 12-years-old in NC-17 rated situations is a bit excessive. A question, what do DP and Gen mean?