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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I truly love this story. it is intereating and carried out excellently. i eagerly await the next update!
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally!! A story where there is an actual storyline, a plot not mindless smut were they rip each other clothes off for not seeing each other and bang each other in that moment. I enjoyed this fic immensely I was amazed that for the first time in a long time there hasn't been a lemon scene. I know most people are here in this site to read smut don't get me wrong I enjoy the read. But it's rare when you actually see a storyline here consistent and staying true to the characters in the manga. I can seriously picture something happening along the lines. But seeing the way the arc is going right now, I have the audacity to believe under the circumstances in the manga, their would be a definite sasu/saku, which I truly despise. Sorry if you are a fan.
Your story is awesome, an amazing feat to go this long and no smut. I can tell you now I can't wait to see what you come up with because you seem to be a good writer and able to stay true to your storyline. I hope to hear from you soon. I was wondering if you have this posted on fanfiction, well I'll go see if you have. good luck and update soon.
Your story is awesome, an amazing feat to go this long and no smut. I can tell you now I can't wait to see what you come up with because you seem to be a good writer and able to stay true to your storyline. I hope to hear from you soon. I was wondering if you have this posted on fanfiction, well I'll go see if you have. good luck and update soon.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good job
please update
please update
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice, for one who was never good at writing it's hard to give specifics that sond intellegent, so all I can say is this s an awsome story that I enjoyed reading. And I hope you do have plans to finish this.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice stuff you got here. Good storyline and I like how you advance everything chapter by chapter. Keep it up!
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So from the first chapter til the last for now.. I see Naruto has become a victim of a sound technique that made him go blind and now Sakura was pointed to be his persona nurse.. She beats on him cuz he grabbed her on accident and then she keeps on forgetting that he can't see and now in the last two chapters. Jiriya is teaching him a jutsu to become some what of his sight by using his chakra to map everything out for him then he forgets that he is blind and could of had a free show of Sakura naked and he goes all noble and runs out to hit his head on the doorframe and almost gets caught but I hope you update this story it is very interesting to hear about Naruto being blind but hope everything goes better for them
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has been a joy to read thus fear please continue to update this story. it has been one of the best narusaku fanfics i have read.
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March 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update!!!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's so true to his style! I can't wait for another chapter!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update