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Man...Naruto getting the hang of being a 'sinful demon'. I love the idea of using voodoo dolls. Maybe he should make an Orochimaru version...it would save everyone a lot of trouble. UPDATE SOON!!

I read it over again and i liked the changes you made, only a few, but I think they were good changes.

It seems like everyone likes the kakashi scene as much as I do. *grins* i've read this chapter 3 times and I still can't stop grinning when I read the part where Naru-chan corners Kakashi and offers a bj. *sighs happily*

ah..hm...nothing else to say. ^_^

thank you!

WOOT! That NaruKaka part was sure one nice bonus! Can ya add in that pairing too? ne ne? Onegai? (sparkly puppy eyes)

Mufufufufu... that last part... "I promise I'll swallow..." I was just getting these great mental images of KakaNaru smut ^^ Mmmm, Naruto-chan's mouth is so cute *^ ^* This chapter was like the set up for smut to come in the next chapter, I hope. Uwaa~ what about some 3-way action with Kakashi and his 2 students now that Sakura is out of commission... *stuffs tissues up nose* Excuse me, I'm getting carried away. Can't wait to see how this turns out, thank you for making my boring day of packing bags a little more interesting ^^

mooooorrre~! *dies*

great fic. and Naruto is PMSy~! j/k.

anyways, I love this fic~! please keep up the good work! and I beg of you: do it soon, nee?

gawd, don't you hate those impatient, annoying fangirls? XD ^^;

zomg. That was incredibly hot. ^^;;;;; Especially the whole Narutoseuctionofkakashi thing. ^_~ Rawr

Wow! First Dattebayo releases episode 122, and then I come here to see this updated! What a great night this is turning out to be~! Wonderful chapter, as per usual. That scene with Kakashi... phew. So hot. ;3

Since you took the time to write out an individual response to my comments last chapter *gushes* i'll take the time to review again! I'm so glad you've updated and loved the chapter even without more SasuNaru. I really like how you've characterized Naruto. It's nice to see him act with firmer resolution toward what HE wants. He's been stepped on for too long and I love seeing him get even. It was also interesting to see Sasuke overhear Tsunade's conversation about Naruto. It'll be fun to see how that plays out in later chapters. Also, OOC Naruto was a nice touch at the end of the chapter and I'm dying to hear why he was acting like that! (I'm guessing it has to do with Kyuubi...) Either way I'm starting to rant, so, please update soon! ^_^

You are so good to me. I was thinking today how much I would like to read a new chapter of Control and lo and behold, here it is.

Awesomeness, I liked the tenseness of Kakashi and Naruto's meeting. Naruto is not taking shit from anyone, about time XD. And goth, that backing Kakashi against the wall was hot, Kakashi might have been pissed off but he was a little affected. I don't feel bad for what Naruto said plus he is right, he should ask Sasuke what is going on between him and Naruto. How easy to go to Naruto, he will say everything. It sadly knows he is missing a little of what Naruto is.

Thanks for your previous comments. I can't wait to see what happens between Sasuke and Naruto because both of them are dying to know XD.

Keep it up, can't wait to see the next chapter!

maybe i'm weird... but i rather liked the naruto/kakasi scene... in that--- really, naruto deserves to complain now and then... great story!