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yo interesting fic you got here!! update soon!!

This has got to be one of my favorite Naruto fics. I love how you portray Sasuke's and Naruto's (especially Sasuke's) characters. It's so...for a lack of a better word, interesting. Haha. Much better than the whole "SASUKE I LUFF YOOo" "OMFGWTF NARUTO I <33 YOU TOO LETS HAVE BANGBANG" Laaaame.

I can't wait to see Naruto break Sasuke. Well. If that ever happens. :)

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This has got to be one of my favorite Naruto fics. I love how you portray Sasuke's and Naruto's (especially Sasuke's) characters. It's so...for a lack of a better word, interesting. Haha. Much better than the whole "SASUKE I LUFF YOOo" "OMFGWTF NARUTO I LUFF U 2 LETS HAVE BANGBANG" Laaame.

I can't wait to see Naruto break Sasuke. If that ever happens. :)

Gah I love it! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
mmmmmmmmm...

I really really really enjoy this story. I like the slightly twisted personality traits that we see every once in a while in there. I do feel that Naruto could have snapped even more in chapter 4 there, it was almost like he didn't even get started properly. But that may have been on purpose from your part. I like how you portray Kyuubi here as well, it's simply wicked! And in chapter 6 where Kakashi said that "Sasuke isn't as strong as you, Naruto", I really enjoyed reading that, because its how I feel when I watch/read Naruto. I always felt that that's why Kakashi chose to train Sasuke and not Naruto before the 3rd part of the chuunin selection exam. I'm glad others think so too.
Other than that, there isn't much I can say, other than PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ooohhhh... i'm curious as to what is going on in naruto's head... hehe, another great chapter! xD hopefully next one will have sasunaru? :P i just wuv them too much... hehe. keep up the great work!

mmmgod this was *twisted* and i loved every fuckin minute. mmhm...pore Sasuke, so deluded and needy and he can't even realize it...yeah. tis good. and Kyubi's portrayal?

that's damn messed up and it's just...to good for words. i await more chapters as patiently as possible. mm. twisted. XD..

Honestly, after actually reading your work over again, I think you're a genius author. I believe you really did disect their characters, so they'd be accuratley similiar to the show. Great job, and, BRAVO to you! (I dont acutually say BRAVO to many people when I review. You must be special. ^_~)

Keep it up!

Woo, this story has definately developed a plot. Are you sure it didn't start off as a one-shot? I reckon the seal is weakening..
Oh, and this chapter was up so fast! I hope all the chapters appear this fast ^_^

*Blinks* *Shakes Head* *Blinks*...I honestly hate it when people put those kind of things in reviews but I can't help it right now because...wow...just...WOW! I LOVED the ending of this chapter! Go Naruto! I have to say that Kakashi was one of my favorite characters until the Chunin exam when he was such an ass towards Naruto and I always love it when people point that out (I think I've mentioned this before but I have the memory of a goldfish and so yeah, you get to hear it again!). I can't wait to find out how Kakashi continues to react towards Naruto...and what is that sneaky fox up to? Now you've got me speculating on what he looks like...I'm thinking he's just going to look like Naruto, and that's why he isn't showing himself, you know, kind of as proof as they've merged and that all the stuff Naruto is doing is just something he wanted to do on his own but didn't have the balls...very Freudian of me...or Freudian of you...I hate Freud and his penis-envy self...But I wont' start my crazy feminist rantings right now, I'm sure you don't want to hear them. But either way, I may just be thinking more into these things than I need to, or I could be needing a long break from studying for my Pysch test on Friday. Though I have to say that this fic is just a plethora of Pysch behaviors that Dostoyevsky (Crime and Punishment...good book, I highly recommend it) would just go crazy for. I'm curious about Sasuke and his reactions. I'm curious about everything really and I really hope you update soon! Cause you know, this is great! Well, I've written my crazyness enough, keep up the brilliant work!

Until Next Time...

Scottishfae