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for Control

by mehmeh

person Diane
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are such a tease!
Please, please, write quickly!
Anyway, this is an hell of a good story and I really enjoy it.
Thank you.

Diane.
person Maya
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yoo! It's Maya again. And you're right, I do hate you for that delicious cliffhanger. I generally don't read SasuNaruSasu. It's not my thing. I prefer ItaSasu. But your fic is a big exception. I love how you explore a darker side to Naruto, I love how you make him as manipulative (even if it's with Kyuubi's help) that most fanfic writers make him. He's so much more interesting that way. And Sasuke... BUAHAHAHAHAH! He was always easily manipulated, just look at Itachi-kun. XDD
person Rika-Chan
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wash Rika... until I decided Rika-Chan wash better.
Yup a whole flock of fans!
Like the ones that already reviewed and my Yaoi crazy sister....
She loves it a lot... a lot a lot a lot like I do!
The ol' teaase em with the strawberry. I love doing that! umm... right
GO YOU! I can't wait for the rest of the story, don't make me wait too much okie?
person harukakatana
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..........you're a mean woman, my darling


lovely chapter <3


as always <333333333333333333333333333

person vampchic
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo... what a crule place to leave off. that was just mean!
so is the hokage necklace starting to reject naruto? it seems that it is.
i really am interested in what you have planned for this fic. i can really feel the plot developing.
i wonder just how much of an influence the kyuuby will be to naruto. and if sasuke will ever realize just what a jerk he really is to naruto.
update soon! i sooo want to read more of this wonderful fic. cant wait for more smut!!XD
person macy
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
reply to you review reply first : uhh..don't worry, i'm almost always late for school XD

I liked this chapter, although... a smut cliffy!!!! honyo~~~ the next chapter's possible events has got me all excited, heeheee... thanks for updating!
person JadeTiger
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your right, i am pissed! Man now i know how my readers feel when i leave them hanging! GRRR!!
person tenohikari
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wheee and Sasuke finally gives in! Love this chapter, everything is starting to look up for Naruto.
person kai
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you're right, i do hate you for leaving it there!!! right before the lemony goodness!!! how could you!?!! UPDATE SOON!!!
person roriko
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG you HAVE to update soon. PLEASE! *throws self at your feet* TT-TT The suspense is killing me! (and my hormones too, maybe)

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