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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story... It starts so beautifully sinful. My only complaint is the switch in direction halfway (Hinata goes from 'you' to 'her'), and the size descriptor is a little jarring. Its hard to keep concentrating on this tantalizing scene when suddenly I'm informed that Kiba has a nine inch penis.
Not a flame, I promise... Just a little constructive crit. Otherwise, perfect! Keep up the good work!
Not a flame, I promise... Just a little constructive crit. Otherwise, perfect! Keep up the good work!
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww i wanna give kiba a hug
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your evil.....PLZ CONTINUE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ciao for Now(^_~)
Ciao for Now(^_~)
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am a both KibaHina fan and a NaruHina aswell.
But I love this fic, about Kiba and Hinata being one with each other.
Hope to read more fics from you, keep up the good work. ^_^
But I love this fic, about Kiba and Hinata being one with each other.
Hope to read more fics from you, keep up the good work. ^_^
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK FRIGGIN' GAWD, FI-nally, a well-written KibaXHina fic thing...
Yaaaay, this brought joy to meee... ^_^
Yaaaay, this brought joy to meee... ^_^
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. One of the best naruto lemons I've read. Thank you for writing it.
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I like this one. I think its good as a one shot. A cooler chapter story would be better if Kiba and Hinata weren't together yet and haven't admitted they have feelings for each other.