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i'm really happy that you updated this story. it's one of my favorites of your work. and i'm glad that naruto and sasuke are back together. now all we need is for sasuke to get his memory back.

great story and i hope you update soon^_^V

Well... I understand how annoying it can be to see that your hit count is about twenty times your review count, but it's still annoying when authors demand a certain amount of reviews before updating. But then... you're under no obligation to update, and it is rude of people to read your story without reviewing it. I guess I just get annoyed because I'm one of those people that reviews basically everything they read, mostly because I enjoy giving feedback. Besides the fact that I'm an author too, and know I would appreciate the reviews.

Aaanyway... loving the story. Even with Sasuke's amnesia, he's still... Sasuke, in a way. His thoughts more than his actions, especially the way that he's annoyed that Naruto's taller than him, but doesn't know why. And how he was briefly bothered by appearing feminine. Just a great job, over all. You pull your readers into the story. If this was a book, it would be one of those ones that I couldn't put down until I had reached the end (despite possible bed sores and dehydration, since it's nice and long *kidding*), which is probably why I'm already starving for an update.

Awesome-ness. I absolutely adore the entire plotline, especially the bond between Naruto and Sasuke. Their relationship is depicted in such a way that it's believable, and I commend you guys on keeping them all in character. I understand how hard that can be to do. Anyhow, my closing plea is thus: Please update soon! I want to see Sasuke regain his old arrogant spark, 'cause even though he's a so-called 'ice bastard', whom we all love, I like the idea that he isn't nearly as fragile as the element suggests. He's a resilient 'ice bastard' in my opinion.

P.S. – "Great Job! Update soon."

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I love this story sooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please Write more!!!!! Its so sad and at the same time happy, i dont know how to explain it, its just......i dont know!? Sugoi!!!!
Will sasuke ever get his eye sight abd memories back? I want to know~~~~!

First off I love your work so far, it's been amazing. I like your style with the character POV's, I'm not a writer so I can't really explain too well, lol. I've really enjoyed this so far and I don't want it to end, I just spent the last five hours straight reading this so could you please post soon? I'm not sure how else I'm supposed to give 'constructive' review other than to say that I don't know how you plan to finish this but I truly truly hope that Sasuke get's his eyesight, which I hope you've been slightly foreshadowing at, lol. Gracias.

Word's cannot express how happy chapter 7 made me. I was so worried for Naruto ,he seemed so broken without Sasuke,when they reunited and Naruto was in chains,well it was very powerful.
thankyou so very much for updating and for even sharing your stories with us all.

Love this story, please update soon.

I'm only on chapter 5, but I have to say, this is an awesome, and excellently-written story. I love the fact you don't skip on content, and your portrayal of Sasuke was great--you eased him into having a heart, rather than just horny ice bitch in love (though, in all reality, he IS that), and your portrayal of Naruto, though off to a shaky start, evens out. And I'm not just saying that because the suicidal angle is so compelling...or at least I think I'm not. Whatever, it still works.

Also, the alternating perspectives thing...I didn't think it worked at first, but it really comes through, and enhances the story so much. You're awesome just for thinking of it. All in all, definitely one of all my all time favourite fictions, nevermind fanfics/lemons.

Wow. Simply ASTOUNDING. I did not see this one coming!!! Poor Sasuke-kun!!! >__< I was waiting anxiously for the update, hoping that Sasuke would show up (just like in the manga, keff keff Kishimoto), and VOILA. I would never have expected him to be blind! Amnesia, perhaps... but blind?!?!?! Oh-Em-Gee.
Usually, the frequent shifts between POVs would be abrupt and ruin the flow of the story or be confusing, but the manner in which this is written uses it perfectly.
AGH. The suspense is killing me!!! Will Sasuke ever get his sight back? Will Orochimaru or Itachi come back and take/taunt/kill Sasuke/be mean to Naruto/(will Itachi laugh at his "foolish otouto"?) ?????
I love this story and hope that it reaches past the 50 review point soon!!!! >__<

Oh. My. Holy. God.

For starters, I have been following this story religiously for a looong time now, and I have to say that it is the single most incredible and well-written Naru/Sasu story out of the many (it seems like hundreds ^_^') I have read. Not only is the plot fantastic, but your characterization has always been spot-on, your writing style is incredible, and the smut is veeeeery tasty! XD I've laughed, I've cried, and felt more pissed off at that little shit lordling than I generally am at real people. It's an amazingly well done story, I simply can't praise it enough, and if I could without completely bugging the crap out of you, I'd write all 50 reviews myself so that I can read the next installment! ;)

Now that I'm done sucking up like a loser, I'd like to let you know some of the more specific things I especially liked in this chapter:

The fact that Sasuke is blind and has amnesia now, I was a little worried about, because I thought it was a little cliche, but you worked it in and did it well so that I was very pleasantly surprised. It works for this, and doesn't feel stretched or contrived.

I also LOVE the fact that even though Sasuke has amnesia, he still "remembers" Naruto. I was all afraid Naruto would just end up getting even MORE depressed when Sasuke treated him like a stranger, but this was much better and the angst was still in there.

Overall, I loved this chapter as I do all your work, and I can't wait for the next one. I will be hopefully waiting for everyone else to review. Please, please, PLEASE get it out soon, or I may die..... :)