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So, in January 2006 you rudely demanded 15 reviews before posting again and over a year and a half later you apparently didn't get your way despite over 30,000 hits. I wish I'd read further before commenting last night or I wouldn't have left a review either but since I did I guess I'll violate my non-posting for review blackmailers rule once more to say that I hope that in the meantime you two have grown up a little and one day decide to write because that is what you enjoy doing instead of as a way to get attention from strangers. You are good story tellers it's a shame that you had to spoil my enjoyment of your story by subjecting the readers to such antics. You didn't need to do it and you probably cost yourself reviews from people like me who normally leave feedback but refuse to do so if demanded to. If you don't enjoy writing enough to do it for its own sake then there are plenty of other hobbies out there that are less demanding. Perhaps you have already found one and that's the reason for no update. In which case I hope your new endeavors go well and that you already look back on this stage of your life with a more mature perspective.

Just finished chapter one and before I head off to bed I had to leave a review. This first chapter could stand on its on but I'm glad that there is still plenty of story left. The structure is interesting and although sometimes it takes me a line to catch up with whose POV we're in after a switch it adds a lot to the development of the story. That even in Naruto's POV we don't hear what the fox is actually saying is intriguing. I really like how Sasuke is able to step in and intimidate the fox. It must think that if it can drive Naruto nuts it will somehow weaken the seal and it will get free. Having someone remind it that there are others with power over it may make it back down a little or it could fight back more before it's forced to behave. Either way there is potential for an interesting story. Even though there are already hints of yaoi you've kept Naruto and Sasuke in character with any changes being believable ones for them having aged a few years.

My god, you people are amazingly talented authors! You put so much depth into the characters without changing how they act in the anime/manga. For the last 3 days I've been addicted to this story and reading it every chance I got, and now that I know that you have more stories you can bet I'll be reading those too. I need to know what happens next, so no matter what don't stop writing this story, PLEASEEEEE!!!!!! I can wait just don't stop!

This is a really good story. such a shame that it appears that it will never be finished.

Oh duuuude......you kill me seriously. HOW FRIGGIN AWESOME THIS FIC IS!!!! I loved every chapter and devoured every paragraph like there's no tomorrow. The last two chapters especially brought tears to my eyes. Poor Naruto having suffered for so long chained up broke my very heart. I'm so happy that even tho Sasuke has amnesia, he is still alive. Their love grows so strong everyday and my heart warms up every moment they are together. I applaud this wonderful and rare fic that I had stumbled across. It's so hard to find great, LONG, angsty and heartwarming fics such as this. Thank you so much for sharing this and I hope you will continue writing this beautiful piece. :D

Whew! I just finished reading the whole story so far, and I love it! I wasn't sure at first about almost the whole story done in 1st person, but it is a great experiment. It also looks like it is quite a bit of fun to write as a team! It seems like a very organic project, maybe even like role-playing. You both must have an amazing rapport with each other. wow, I hope this review tips the balance and encourages you to add the next chapter!

Have either of you participated in NANOWRIMO?

If you have an email notification list for new chapters, please put me on it!

So sad...I hope things will get better for Sasuke! I just love how your characters act, their personnality ; especially Sasuke's and Naruto's.
Your story is well written though sometimes the change of narrator is difficult to follow. So far it's one of the best I've read.

Wow your story is amazing!! You write incredibly long chapters and I thank you for that!!

First chapter im reviewing but ill review it over all chapters as new reader.. so far the story is great a different form of writing then im used to seeing it's great as its kept me reading even though it was getting late ( hope i make sense ) is confusing in some places but the way you've written it deffinately makes me want to read more of it

i hope to read more of this story soon ill try to think of better review next time not used to writing these things

i love this story, pleast continue!!