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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Type more damn it... it's killing me xD the chapters always seem so long, yet I finish them in like 15 minutes! :P
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have read many fanfics on this site but you are the first i ever reveiwed for... feel special.
i thought i would inform you that i love your story... but...
if you make this story a sad one in the end... I WLL DESTORY YOU!!!!
you know if you make the ending like story "i think i better leave right now" (which is a good story that you should read on ff.net it's sasunaru) i will never forgive you, the ulternate ending did help a bit... but it's not the same.
love the story. looking forward to next weeks chapter!
Sami
i thought i would inform you that i love your story... but...
if you make this story a sad one in the end... I WLL DESTORY YOU!!!!
you know if you make the ending like story "i think i better leave right now" (which is a good story that you should read on ff.net it's sasunaru) i will never forgive you, the ulternate ending did help a bit... but it's not the same.
love the story. looking forward to next weeks chapter!
Sami
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh...my...goodness! Jyraiya was so close! what would have happened if he had succesed? what about akastuki? now Naruto's strenght is sealed, what will he do now to help? will he try to use kyubi's chakra for the last time? he has Gaara's help, but will it be enough? will he really die to protect everyone? is that really the only way? arg! please update soon!
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 13)
I'm gonna cry. So sad. Why must Naruto die? :(
Well, at least it's good angst.^^
Hope you update soon; I really want to see how the end will be.
Until then,
Ja ne~
I'm gonna cry. So sad. Why must Naruto die? :(
Well, at least it's good angst.^^
Hope you update soon; I really want to see how the end will be.
Until then,
Ja ne~
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this isn't going to be one of those happy ending stories is it? *just realizes this now* sad... but the story is great nontheless even if i can't forsee any blue skies.
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really feel pity for Jiriaya. I mean... it's his student! And wow, poor Naru-chan. But I loved Gamakichi's arrival!
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really do love this story. I have it in my favorites and check up every once in a while. It's very well written, and right now very sad. I'm hoping that you're not going to kill of Naruto, but I can see how it would work into the plot. I'm just hoping something can be done, but I'll keep waiting!
Ja--
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Ja--
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, Naruto-san isn't going to die is he?! *sniffles* ;-; I want a happy ending! And you scared me there! Goodness! When Jiraiya was going for the finishing blow, I nearly had a heart attack!
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! thank god that jirayra wasnt able to kill naruto!!! but now what??? what will happen now that akatsuki is coming to konoha and the hokage is seriously thinking about a way to end narutos suffering... and sasuke!!! what will he do!?!?!?! such a great chappy!!! but im waiting for the next at the edge of my seat!! update soon~ ^o^
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is beyond brilliant and beautiful. I'm tearing up already, and Naruto hasn't even died yet. You are an excellent author with much to be proud of. You have kept everyone reasonabily in character while still maintaining artistic creativitiy and orginality. I am definately inspired to work harder to achieve this level. Please keep up the fantastic work and get the next chapter out as soon as you can. Until then, ja ne!