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for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

by Kalariona

schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.O. omg! sasuke jumped him! what's he gonna do? *grabs popcorn*
person Sukara ((AKA Sentai))
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-Eeps- i wonder what Sasuke is going to do!! So funny. x3 And i wonder in Ino's parents really like Naruto..so mysterious! Kakaka. Keep up the good work. I'm always on the look out for your updates! =3
person Cindyip
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to have you updating. Do another soon. Happy New year!^_-
person yurathewicked
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAYAYAYAYAYAY!

an update! i love this story *sigh* i like the shika/sakura thing, they're so cute together and i never would have put them together myself! i've only ever seen hints of shika/sakura in other fics. anyways, i like where the story is going (sasu/naru all the way!) but i'm a little sad about ino. things are going so good w/ her family and she likes him so much :( but there's no spark, so naruto shouldn't lead her on! but how will he get out of this mess?

AND WHAT IS IN THAT CHEST!?!? \

hehe
person Lanier
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
argh... oooooh so much frustration. Ino's family was so sweet and I feel bad for Ino. But Naruto belongs to Sasuke. I cant wait to see the next chapter.
person ~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on!
This fic is SO good!
Update please! and SOON!

~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
person AkaiTsume
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with the others, I want to know what's going on in Naruto's head, too. ^_^ I do love the pairings, even if I'm also mainly a NaruSasu shipper. The only problem I've noticed is that in the last chapter, you had Makoto refer to Naruto as Naruto-nee...which is the equivalent of "big sis Naruto." It's supposed to be Naruto-niichan, lol. Other than that, fantastic work, and please don't make us wait too long for an update next time!

-Akai
person DogDemonChick
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz update! This story ROX I love it!!!! So I command you to UPDATE!................ plz
person ~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO! You can't cut me off like that!
it's like.... 1 in the morning and I have to get up in the morning, you made me stay up all night and now I want more!
Update as soon as possible! I'm going to have messed up dreams tonight tho (he he he!)
Keep writing more!

~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
person Becki
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! This is an amazing series!

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