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for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

by Kalariona

person jai
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating! I love this fic so far! I'm really liking Ino from your fic, lol.
person Obito
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omfg! that was so good...and sasuke's actually acting kind of nice, for once...! ~love

you GOTTA continue this story...or I'll hunt you down... ^^
I love it. I wanna make you cookies~
person Katzztar
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I STILL say that Ino should end up with Naruto , not Sasuke. There is an over abundance of Sas/Naru fics, and next to none of Ino/Naru. that odd pairing is what is giving this fic a wonderful feel of uniqieness (-_- I know I spelled it wrong)

Also Ino is now 'in the know' about Kyubii. She already has given a tremendous ammount of moral support to Naruto by not rejecting him after finding out the truth.

heheh I love the fact that she screamed at the nine-tails......
person Yami Jay
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ino's tehcnique as a good benefit to it as I can see. ^__________^Wanna read more.
person Monmon
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooooh!!! New Chapter! I absolutely love this story!!! Please continue! I will faithfully wait for your next chapter!
person FlameArchanist
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant.
person clowangel
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh? Gaara? Add him! *giggles* It'd be even better if Gaara had some feelings for Naruto. =) Sasuke would blow! Hahaha!
person Sukara
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Chapter five ish up!!! ^^ I can't wait for teh next chapter to come out!! ^^ lease hurry!!! I can't wait ._. ^^
person phoenixdown7
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good, highly engaging. I just wish the last chapter was longer. ^^ I definitely want to see what Sasuke's reaction to all that Naru/Ino cuddling is...poor clueless boy. Please update soon, so that I'll don't have to wait, biting my nails in anticipation!
person Scottishfae
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I liked the cleverness of the Kyuubi and his trick on Ino. It was a nice detail and it fits with his personality. As for Gaara's presence in the story, I myself, love Gaara, he's one of my favorite characters and I would love to see him in here. But as its going the story seems to be falling in nicely together and developing awesome, even without my beloved Gaara. I hope you update soon, it's awesome!

Until Next Time...

Sfae

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