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for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

by Kalariona

person macy
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im kinda confused. i don't know what sasuke's planning, and i don't really understand the dream -_-;; ahehehe...it makes me excited about the next chapter coz I think it'll make things clearer. thanks for the update ^^
person LadySamurai
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha Ha Ha!! Sasuke with a girly bag! what exactly is his plan anyway?
person Letta
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the Ino/Naruto friendship more than the couple, but if he ends up with Sasuke, then there's nothing to worry about. Honestly, I really liked the way you wrote their friendship. Also, what was it that Ino gave Naruto on the bridge that he put in his pocket, when Sakura and Sasuke saw? I never saw anymore of that. Anyway, I just love this story. It's very good.
person Kori Nibiki
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter. We see a bit more of Sasuke's inner emotions surfacing. Highly enjoyed and looking forward to the next installment. Keep up the great work. Ja!
person Saki
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all with the chapters on Naruto,Ino and Sasuke but I do admit that I really love the story you made.^^ oh btw, it's Shizune when you put Shizume but other than that, the story was good itself.I can't wait for the updates.
person izumi
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeeeehhhhaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!11 finally!!! some sasunaru action.. not that i hate ino in this fic.. muaahh!! i love you!! ^^
person Washi
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really looking forwards to reading the next chapter, I assure you ^_^! I'm becoming increasingly curious. I hope the next chapter comes soon! ^_^
person sukara
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's an okay chapter, I was hoping for a lil more Sasu/Nari action :Squeal: But I guess that can wait in the next chapter and or later chapters...just make it come soon!!!! Pwease? ^_^ keep up the good work!! ^_^
person Jenny
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the 8th chap.. the moment between Sasuke and Naruto.. I had goose pomps.. :DD Thou nothing happened, but still..very exciting <3
person Michiru
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm. Well, you may not be happy with it, but I am. :p Sasuke/Naruto interaction = good. I look forward to the next chapter!!

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