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for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

by Kalariona

person Kori Nibiki
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke finally got his chance to kiss Naruto and so he kissed him senseless, but they were interupted by Ino, Sakura, and Shikamaru's arrival. Thus inorder to give Sasuke a chance to get away and to assuage part of his guilt for kissing Sasuke when he had a girlfriend, Naruto kissed Ino "in a way that wasn't really suitable for public viewing."

XD XD XD

Yeah that's just my fangirl side taking over for a bit. Great chapter and cant' wait for the next. Keep up the awesome writing. Ja!
person clowangel
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoot! Go Naruto! Didn't know you had it in ya! XD Teehee
person Anon
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AW, I love Gaara. ;___________; *pokes Sasuke* Will you leave some room later? XD
person mE
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could you!! You kept us waiting like forever!! grr!! I love this stiory so much and I want to know how everything will work out.. :D Keep up the googd work <3
person ghostninja85
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh. I'd forgotten about this fic. I'm glad that you decided to continue it.

The only critique I have for this chapter is Tsunade's OOC behavior. I think she's have a better hold on her emotions than that.

Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person 90210
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! i loved that last chapter!!! please update soon,after that last chapter i like this fic more than i ever have.
person Sukara
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That took a looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time to update ~_~ * Huggl;es tightly* I'll huggle you to death if you don't update soon! >=)
person Van
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE OMRE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!! MAKE THE TEME JELOUS!!!!!!!
person Sukara
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Gasps* *Makes eyes go >< with a sheeping grin* *Squeals* I can't wait to see what happens!!! ^_^
person minjin00
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh i want to know what sasuke's planning to do. cant wait for the update.

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