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for Take My Pain Away

by CandyElly

person tomboygirl432
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*tsk* damn, still haven't managed to catch a glimpse of that face! Darn! I wish we'd actually get a chance to see it.... though it was rather funny when he pulls of the mask....only to reveal another mask! LOL! Anwayz, great story, when are the lemons coming? And I also wanna find out what's up with Sasuke....that bastard, I hate him....*grrr* ANYWAYZ...hope you update soon, cya l8r!
person Wist Star
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!!!

I luv this story!! and i want to continue reading how they end up being a perfect couple. How u protrayed Kakashi in this story Was a godo job done well!! iwell as u can tell i am a kakashi fan and he is just absolutly a wonderful man who is perverted XD!! Well i want to cheer u on and do a great job writting thee stories and hope to read more from your future stories to come.
person Kakashi Fujisawa
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic and I can't wait to see where you take it. You write Kakashi pretty well, and you capture a mature Sakura. Can't wait to read more! Waiiiii! Keep up the good work.
person kayoko
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
advertising, nothing is better than word of mouth.

other then that, just put it in as many places as you can:
you fic is a het fic, right? (sorry, i didn't read it..i just flipped thru it)

blissful ignorance (forum) http://www.blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/viewforum.php?f=63

submit it to rokudaime http://aksarah.com/naruto/fanfic.htm

The original naruto fanfiction archive http://www.finalknight.net/naruto/index.php

if you haven't posted them there already.

good luck with your writings ^_^
person Sussi
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great story! I really love your wrighting! Hope you ceep it up and wright more good chapters! X3
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...While I'm mildly confused...I liked new chapters. The Kaka/Saku interaction was good. I also liked the Ino Sakura bit in the bar, it was a nice peek into their friendship. Ouch though, with the way Sakura's behaving it looks like Sasuke is cruisin’ for a bruisin’ the second they find him. Keep up the good work.
person Fairia13
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So hard to stop writing? The why quit? Please - update more, this is terribly interesting! Not only is it NOT a gay naruto-bangs-sasuke story, but it has a PLOT!

YAY FOR PLOTS!!! There's a SERIOUS shortage of plots in the world, and I am THRILLED to have found one. Though I am a die-hard Inuyasha fan, Naruto is for sure my second-favorite. (I have a IY fic posted here under this same name)

YOU ARE AWSOME!!!
person dAni3Lr
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
kewl~* keep writing! KakaSaku pairing? sound sweet! ^^
person jyujinkai-shinma
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty good. I'd like to see more soon.
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it. The descriptions paint a clear picture of what's happening. I'll be interested to see more Kaka/Saku in the future. Keep up the good work.

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