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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HeHe. I liked it! Don't put yourself down. That was great writing, in my opinion. I think more chapters would be great.
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved it^^. for your first time, this is written like some of the more experienced writers and even better than some of them. truly amazing and thorough. i hope that you continue to write more sasunaru and maybe even make an off shoot from this in a sequel or , dare we dream, a series^-^ spawning from this?
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November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-Flails about madly.- MULTICHAPTERS, YES. I WANT MORE. x333333 It was awesome. Please continue. xD
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November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That wasn't terrible at all, although there were a few incontinuities they were forgivable as I don't think most people would notice. Either way, I think you should in fact continue it, it's not as bad as you seem to think it is! Keep up the good work!
~Hawk
~Hawk
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November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is your first lemon fic? Are you sure? B/c it was REALLy well written! You must write more! I demand that you write more! There just isn't enough decently written Naruto/Sasuke lemon fics out there. And please by all means make this a chapter fic! I still can't belive this is your first lemon fic!
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November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your fanfiction is really good!!! Really!!!! Please do another!! with Naruto and Sasuke!! A good SasuNaru and not just a solo!! I think you can do that !!!!! And it'll be great!!!!! kiss and good luck
PS: I'm french so I can't writte a lot of word in english, sorry^^ but I understand !!!!
But I can tell you that I LOVE your work!! :p
PS: I'm french so I can't writte a lot of word in english, sorry^^ but I understand !!!!
But I can tell you that I LOVE your work!! :p
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November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THat was Hot and it rocked SO hard. It is a great begoning for more, ohh I hope there will be more this was sooooo good. Keep up the good work.
lo
lo
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November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More!
That made my day. If you don't contiue I will be disapointed.
That made my day. If you don't contiue I will be disapointed.
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November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was very, very yummy. i'd love to see more and i'll definitely read it if you write it. practice is always a good thing. ^_~
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November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Naughty Naughty Sasuke ::shakes finger at him::
I have one request.......continue it!!!!
I have one request.......continue it!!!!