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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was extremely hot. Seriously. The plots a little unoriginal, but you wrote it very well, especially the first chapter that was talking about the mission and their rivalry. Great job. I truly enjoyed this.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please please please tell me you're continueing this. i loved it.
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You did this without a Beta?! It's frickin' AWESOME the way it is!!! Your writing is soooo good and so detailed! It really is amazing and I'm happy to read your work! I hope you write and post the next chapter to this up soon because it is GOOD!!! ^_^
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please don't think this is horrible and stop updating, because it's absolutely NOT. The story's well-written, the descriptions are hot, and I really, really want to see what Sasuke's going to do next. Update soon!
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you make it sound like that was absolutley horrid. well it wasnt. trust me, there are worse, a chunk of em on this site. hehe. continue! and if you do make it a different pairing later on, gaaranaruto not neji, he sucks.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading this fiction aaaaaaages ago. But it's always nice to see an author return to an otherwise abandoned work. Regardless of your own disappointment with this chapter, I give a thumbs up. Hot tamales.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
honestly, in my opinion, it was fine as it was. If, and i mean if, there were any mistakes - there were very few.
i truely can't wait for chapter 3! (i hope there will be a chapter 3) i just love how you turned the situations around (honestly, i saw naru walking in on sasu from the beginning). but i still love it!
i truely can't wait for chapter 3! (i hope there will be a chapter 3) i just love how you turned the situations around (honestly, i saw naru walking in on sasu from the beginning). but i still love it!
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is great, you keep saying you don't think it is good, but it really is...please continue
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You hate it~!?? - I love it. Thanks!
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's really good. I remember reading the first chapter to this ages ago, and I'm glad you're continuing.
This story is better then 90% of the SasuNaru NC-17 fics, mostly, I think, because you're very critical of it.
Well, I hope that the wait for the next chapter is a little shorter then the wait for this one....
This story is better then 90% of the SasuNaru NC-17 fics, mostly, I think, because you're very critical of it.
Well, I hope that the wait for the next chapter is a little shorter then the wait for this one....