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for Memento

by DarkKunoichi

person Jaebin
schedule November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

This was a truely disturbing and disgusting story... I LOVED IT!

The way you wrote it was perfect. Orochimaru was portrade very nicely, I can still see his smile.
I don't know what else to say, apart from, you did a superb job. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Hrano
schedule November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, by the middle of the story, I was wondering how long they'd hold out. Gripping! Riveting! *gets smacked by Foamy* ow...

Anyway, I read this fic and MY GOD was it impossible to tear away from it! The way you riberibe the rending... my god. I could hear the cracking and the popping and the tearing.

*shudders* My god, I could almost taste blood... I loved it.

More! More FICS!!! NOW!!!!!!!
person TenshiKaitou
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah...i was not very enthusiatic to read about characters i don't know at first, but then i say heck, just give it a try and i did. well...i would say...this isn't that bad at all. in fact, it is pretty interesting in a weird, angsty way. if you're going to continue again, please update soon! otherwise, nice fic.
person Meow
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-shudders- That was.. Oh god that was so bad yet so good... Like... Oh fuck, it's a great story but it.. You know what I mean.. And man... I don't get frightened by scarey movies and scarey stories and all that but.. Oh freaking god I'm shaking.. While I was reading this I could picture it in my head... And my eyes are wide and I'm shaking... This is a very good story though. No one recognizes Anko.. And she's my favorite character. But... Oh god I still can't get over th story.. I'M STILL SHAKING! Please continue.

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