rate_review Reviews

Hi!!! Tsugoiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii des!! your.... introduction was rather interesting... Kill every bad men in the beggining so there is no more problem with them, is a.. very good thing!!!^^ I love Story mainly because it begin with a Naru/Ita rather interesting for say the less... and this promise a lot of fun for after!!!
Poor Itachi will die soon... will he see his kid? Itachi wants to come back in Konoha but... he is a criminal, he will be judge or did the fact that he was the one who killed Orochimaru and Kabuto give him a grace for his crime?!
Update soon please!!

Interesting start. You would be better off if you spent a little more time editing the future chapters. There were a few typos.

I'm interested in where you are going with this fic. Update soon!