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Is that it? I thought you could more towards the story and the traveling Naruto will have. What about Sasuke? Will he come back to his home? What will he do when he sees Naruto gone? Where has Naruto gone? Will Sasuke go after him? So many questions. This story could be greatly explored. Keep up the good work.

Wow, much better than before. It flows much nicer, i'm just sad that Sasuke's such a prick *tears* can't he just love Naruto and hold him forever *more tears*. I would really enjoy a sequel to this, I don't know why people wouldn't want one but it lays in my opinion that if you have an idea you should never hold it in. With creativity you can never please everyone but you should never strangle it. You only get better by exercising it.

Please Please Please Please! Write more! I love this. I swear I am hanging on every word. I want to know what happens next.

Much Better!!! ^^ GREAT!! ...
Just one thing when you use sensei you must put it after a name or alone : Iruka-sensei or sensei... sensei-Iruka does not exist in japanese...
But your story is just great! Will you continue?
If you do, Naruto must have his revenge on Sasuke!!!!! maybe a Gaa/Naru... or some other pairing... make Sasuke suffer a little maybe even a lot!!! :D

It's much better now! It's good! Please write a sequel! ^_^

It's Iruka-sensei btw. You should write another chapter with Gaara and Naruto together and Sasuke jealous.

I agree with Lalala! ^_^