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for Telling Eyes

by wrathchylde

person Anon
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!^^
So, is this the last chapter? Awww, where the lemon? :pouts: I was hoping for some action...
Oh, well, nice story anyway! XD

~KF~
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quite a good story, I like it. Hope this isn't really the end, it's such a good story.
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cries*

SO DARN SWEET! and cute *sob*

You're right; there aren't enough Naru/Saku fics. This one was very good though! Loved it!
person Kilroy
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god. That has to be one of your best chapters yet *Chapter 4 'well you named it 3'*. Great work wrath, cant wait for the next.
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. You should continue it.
person Kilroy
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you can write. Great story, good work and I hope to see more from you soon
person ri100014
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well its too bad you've declared this plotline a dude and dubbed yourself a lazy and underappreciated author who isn't interested in updated their barely even recognized contributions. Because now I won't get to place any slim bits of hope in my mind for a continuation. Hope you return to Ino's story though, if you do, I will be sated... somewhat.

Till next time... adios.
person Josh
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like the story very emotional which I hate to say this story made me shed a tear.. I gotta say update soon cuz this is a great story that you have written
person Demise
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ummmm....a bit confused here.
Narutos funeral ? Is this a coverup for Naruto , to make Akatsuki stop hunting him ?

Really , this last chapter made me confused as hell.....or will it all be explained in a future chapter whats going on ?

Beside from the confused part i really liked it thou.
person JB
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story you put alot of heart into this one. How you made it a suicide cuz she finally realized that she had someone right in front of her but to late then he is alive and she almost died and then it's a happy ending for now. Like the emotions you shoown in this story hope you update soon. JOSH

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