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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HELL FUCKING YES! I WAS WAITING FOR THIS EXACT THREESOME TO BE WRITTEN ABOUT! And I read your mission statement, and I support you 100%!
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is seriously good stuff. Keep going.
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IT BET BELIEVE IT!!!! *raises fist to air* THERE IS A GOD!!! oh my god i'm begging you. please add a new chapter. tsunade and naruto is a pair ive wanted to read about for the longest time. but its just that some people say "its wrong" because tsunade is fifty and naruto is twelve well to hell with them. updaye your story and keep up the good work.when are you going to include shizune huh? this is getting interesting.
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow. That was *really* well written. Not just good smut, but a good story too. Great job.
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Have no problem with peoples lifestyles, but I really am tired of seeing all that yaoi.
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm usually a yaoi only kinda girl, but after seeing the strange pairing description, just had to read. Your writing style is excellent!!! Very very good! Thanks so much for writing and sharing! ^_^
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its about time someone did one of these and man did it kickass
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I bow down to you, you truly are my God. (both of you) I'm very tired of all these Yaoi (whatever it is) fics attacking me everytime I try to find a good read either here or at fanfiction.net. Please, your writing is fantastic and I need more Het. I'm tired of searching through the meager supply of Het pairings. I LOVE YOU (not homo, but brotherlye . e . . . )
"I have nothing against a homosexual lifestyle, but its just weird that 99 percent of the Yaoi stories are by . STR STRAIGHT FEMALES!!!!!
Anyway good story, please continue.
"I have nothing against a homosexual lifestyle, but its just weird that 99 percent of the Yaoi stories are by . STR STRAIGHT FEMALES!!!!!
Anyway good story, please continue.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, and I can't wait for you to update and tell more about why Naruto was so down and what Tsuna and Shizu are going to do to him next. One complaint though: he calls her "Tsunade-chan" at one point. BIG no-no! You call pets and childrenan,"an," not your elders and definitely not your commander in chief, even if she IS having sex with you.
That took me out of the action a bit. Other than that, though, it was grade A.
That took me out of the action a bit. Other than that, though, it was grade A.